-Use correct grammar. I don't go for that 'kewl' thing.
-More than one sentence please (more like a paragraph)! Otherwise I'm not motivated, you know?
-Plots are great, plotting's fantastic.
-Character development! It would be amazing to have some character development here, not just things like 'they went out to have a burger.' No.
-PM me if you want our characters to be romantically involved, so we can plot, and see if our characters actually have chemistry. Also, none of my characters are shallow enough to want to kiss anyone after knowing them for one day.
CHARACTER BIOS:
Alice Fitzherbert
Hanson Levi
Benjamin Holmes
Mary Cortez
A L I C E F I T Z H E R B E R T
∆ Finnick: Finnick and Alice were one of those couples. They were absolutely adorable together. They drifted apart romantically, but it wasn't anything dramatic. They're still on friendly terms.
∆ Kataro: Alice dated Kataro for a while before Finnick. Their relationship was not a healthy one by all means. Kataro would leave Alice for months on end, and simply stroll back into her life as if it were nothing. Alice was relieved to cut it off.
∆ Vinyl Record: After Vinyl nearly burned down the whole of Hypnos cabin, she was assigned Alice for a supervisor-slash-counsellor. Alice was determined and would not let Vinyl discourage her, even though they still don't get along that well.
H A N S O N A L E K S A N D E R L E V I
∆ Nix Maccio: Nix and Hanson were dating for a long time. They had their ups and downs, just like any other couple, and Hanson first thought they were going to be forever, but it turned out that they were maybe too different to be together. Their break up hurt them both hard, but Hanson slowly got over her. They’re sort of friends, although they've changed a lot.
∆ Sawyer: Hanson just met Sawyer, when she walked into the infirmary after having burned a good part of the skin of her hand off.
W I L L I A M B E N J A M I N S C O T T H O L M E S
∆ Taleisin Emmett Heap III: Benjamin and Taleis got off to a very rocky start--they both annoyed the hell out of each other, but in order to escape camp, they needed to work together. They went on a road trip across the United States, heading to LA first, and then up to England. Somewhere along the way, they fell in love. It's always Taleis for Benjamin; Taleis keeps him right.
∆ Victoria Laroche-Guyot: Benjamin's father and Victoria's father are cousins. Victoria and Benjamin, however, share the same mother. If that weren't enough to make them feel connected, they are also the two smartest people at camp. Benjamin (although he'll kill anyone who says it) cares for her. She's one of the only people who Benjamin doesn't think is an idiot; in fact, he esteems her intellectually. They often have scientific discussions--which may or may not end in light bickering about their conflicting paths of Work.
∆ Erin Elizabeth: Erin is one of Benjamin's only friends at camp. They visited New York for a bit, and she was with him when he bumped into his old friend Mark (who thought him dead) and his girlfriend. It didn't go so well, but Erin was there for Benjamin.
M A R Y C O R T E Z
∆ Andi: Andi is Mary's best friend. They met at the archery range. They're sisters in everything but blood.
D E R E K A N T H O N Y H A Z E L
∆ Nix Maccio: Nix and Derek have been silently sitting next to each other whenever they eat at the mess hall, yet have never exchanged a word. They don't even know each other's names. They become like family, but more, like Pack.
P R Z E M Y S Ł A W " S T I L E S " P R E V A L S K Y
∆ Vinyl Record: They met in the Courtyard, after Stiles epically tripped over his Red Riding Hood, nearly crashing into an unsuspecting Vinyl.
R H Y T H M R E C O R D
P E R C Y J A C K S O N
Lolita Kai: Percy's favourite half-sister.
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