Bray Piere (REMAKE)

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Name: Bray Michelle Piere. Bray Michelle was an originally made up name--his mother just liked the way the name sounded to her.
Gender: Bray is a male.
Mortal Parent: Jane Piere (deceased). Before her death, Jane was a business woman who didn't really pay attention to Bray, which is what caused most of Bray's struggles in life, to current day. She was from Montanna but moved to Miami, Florida after she found out she was pregnant. Jane didn't really want a child, but she didn't dislike the thought of it at all; Jane just saw children as distractions and didn't really see the point in them, unless they were males and carried on the family name. Before she was found out to be pregnant, Jane was going to go back to college to get a nursing degree, which was what she wanted to become as a child, but her parents put her in the direction of business, like they were involved in.
God Parent: Bray's god parent is Delphin, the god of the dolphins. He didn't exactly, until very recently when he met Madeline Scott, like the fact that his father was Delphin. He would've much preferred Phobos or the such.

Delphin and Jane met in Montanna when Delphin disguised himself as a a marine biologist dude, named Pete Gefr. Jane fell in love with him after spending a day or so with him, and vise versa. You know the story from their on out. After Jane became pregnant, Delphin left forever, just leaving a simple note, explaining who he was, because he couldn't tell Jane that to her face.
Date of Birth: Bray was born on October 2nd, 1998. He is currently fifteen and will be sixteen soon. The day he was born was like any other in Miami; pretty warm. He was born in a hospital near Miami Beach.
Place of Birth: As stated, in a hospital near Miami Beach.
Hometown/Last Residence: Miami, Florida, in an older beach house that was constantly bombarded with outside noise.
Race/ethnicity: Bray is Caucasian (white), and a bit Greek from his great grandparent, who resided in Greece their entire lives. They were explorers.
Accent: Eastern US Accent
Skin Tone: Bray is very pale, which is funny for a surfer.
Eye Color: Bray's eyes are described as a blueish-greenish-grayish. They show sadness and loneliness most of the time.
Hair Color: Bray's hair is naturally black.
Hair Length: Bray's hair is fairly long; his bangs go to a few strands past his eyes.
Height: Bray is five feet and eleven and a quarter inches tall. Yes, the quarter matters.
Weight: Bray weighs around one hundred twenty pounds or so.
Body Type: Bray is skinny, and has very little muscle. He is certainly not weak, but he's not a weight-lifter.
Appearance: Bray is a tall and skinny guy who usually wears a white t-shirt or a CHB t-shirt and jeans. His skin is very pale. His hair is naturally black; his bangs come to about a few strands past his eyes. He usually wears his favorite and only pair of Nike shoes, which are black and blue, his two favorite colors. He wears short white socks. Bray is not noddle-armed, and has a few muscles, but doesn't look like any weight-lifter. His eyes are a blueish-greenish-grayish, and usually give off a sad or lonely type of look.
Weapon: He uses CB weapons from the Shed.
Armor: He doesn't currently own any.
Pet(s): No "pets," but his best friend is a dolphin named Rin, who is talked about a bit more in the History. Rin is gray and smooth, with white under his fins. He is about five feet wide, ten feet long, and weighs about five hundred pounds or so; he's not very big for a dolphin. Whenever Rin talks in English, he sounds like a twenty year old calm male's voice. Rin is about fifteen years old, so he still has another ten or fifteen years in him, according to Google.
Skills/Talents:

• Skating
  
• Fighting
  
• Dolphin-riding
  
• Surfing
  

Flaws:

• Shy
  
• Doesn't trust easily
  
• Isn't very good at sticking up for himself
  
• Mean at first
  
• He used to not really want to know people he's "good in disguise," but he's changed a bit, and is a bit more confident he's good now.
  
• Gets acne easily
  
• Small ears (physical flaw)
  

Strengths:

• Socializing with dolphins
  
• Swimming/surfing
  

All of his talents, basically.
Weaknesses:

• Starting conversation
  
• Talking to his crushes
  
• Making people feel better
  

Likes:

• Dolphins
  
• Surfing
  
• Water/swimming
  
• Certain video games
  
• Picnics
  
• Dolphin-riding
  
• Climbing
  

Dislikes:

• Annoying people
  
• Social groups
  
• Dream-crushers
  
• Bullying
  

Fears:

• Scared of heights
  
• Scared of rollercoasters

Personality: Bray, when you first meet him, is dark and tries to avoid you. If you get on his nerves, he'll get mad at you and yell mean things. The truth is is he's not really bad, he's a good person in disguise (like Snape from HP). He is pretty shy, actually. Bray usually doesn't soften up until you've become true friends, which is pretty hard to do. He gets nervous around social grouping and the such. Bray is nice and kind and loyal to to his real friends, but as said, it's hard to become his friend. He os more on the nerdy side than jock, not liking very many sports or the such.
Powers: He can talk to dolphins. It doesn't really have a limit, he does it freely.
Social Status: Bray is pretty much a loner with few friends.
Summer or Year Rounder: Bray is a Year-Rounder.
Years at Camp: Bray has been at camp for nearly five years.
Life Before Camp: Bray lived in Miami with his mother, who didn't really pay attention to him. He grew up through hard times, being bullied a lot and only having one friend. When he was five, he went to the beach with his friend, Marty, and tried surfing. He didn't like it at first, but as he practiced more, he got more comfy. One day, while he was surfing alone, he heard a voice, but no one else to seem to hear. He soon found out it was a dolphin. They became friends. It didn't have a name, so Bray named it Rin. Bray, early in the morning, would go out from shore and visit Rin everyday. Rin officially his other best friend along with Marty. At age ten, he decided to show Marty what he could do. He showed him it, and Marty revealed he was satyr and told him of camp. When they went back to shore, they found out Bray's mother had been killed by a empousai, who was searching for Bray. Marty took Bray to camp. One day, when he was eleven, he went to the CHB beach. He saw Rin; he recognized the distinct black mark on his left fin. Rin told him that he was happy to finally find him. A month after he left for camp, Rin started searching everywhere for him that he could. Bray (and Rin) still to this day reside in Camp Half-Blood.
Role-playing Example: Bray went over to the beach ocean, putting his hand in it, feeling the medium-temperature water. He looked out, wondering if Rin was close. He grabbed a surf board, and went out, surfing, trying to find Rin. His black hair got dripping wet. Finally, after going through three big waves, he saw Rin. He swam over on his board, and they talked. Whenever this was done with, he went back to shore and went to his cabin. Tired out, Bray took a cat-nap. Whenever he woke up, he headed to the Mess Hall, where he had a slice of pizza. It was very good, he thought. He got up and headed back to his cabin.
Notes: http://www.camphalfblood.org/t19466-bray-piere-delphin I copied some things from here and edited a bit. (The notes on that form is still in effect.)

Can you specify his ethnicity more (ie: French and German)?

Specify his accent more. Does it come from New York? New Jersey?

What kind of weapons does he normally use?

Did you add a physical flaw in somewhere?

I think his Fears would be different from his Flaws in that his fears wouldn't be seen as crippling as his flaws?

Snape was not a good person in disguise; he was a bully to the kids even though he was supposedly on the "good" side with Dumbledore. Add a bit more to the personality.

How did your character's mother die?

Well, I thought that was a bit self-explanatory, since he was born in Miami, making him American-Caucasian? Also, his Greece side mentioned.
It's like mine, and I live in PA, so.
Daggers and such.
Ah, forgot that. Edited.
I'm not sure what you mean. Fears are counted as Flaws, but there's a section dedicated to it, so I just put look at his flaws because I didn't want to retype the entire thing.
Well, you know a bit of what I mean.
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SNAPE ISN'T A GOOD PERSON IN DISGUISE WHY WOULD U SAY THAT JUST BC SNAPE LOVED LILY & "PROTECTED" HARRY DOESN'T MEAN HE STILL DIDN'T  BASICALLY ABUSE NEVILLE TO THE POINT OF BEING HIS BOGGART LIKE SON HOW IS SNAPE AT ALL CONSIDERED GOOD SNAPE IS LITERAL TRASH

put the fears under the fears section

shy, doesn't like to be the center of attention, and not very social are all basically the same thing. shy sums it up enough.

I could rant but this is my char form so xD
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u can rant all u want & snape will continue 2 be the second most awful person in young adult literature lmao (second only 2 umbridge)

could you be a bit more specific about his weapon choice? like, does he use a sword? a dagger? a bow?

He uses things such as daggers, knives, and swords, not long-range weapons like bows.

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