Emily Stone Buettner

Demigod: Greek
Name: Emily Stone Buettner (Emma to her friends)
Physical age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Coal Black
Hair: Ink black, curly falls just short of her shoulders
Height: Five foot five
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent: Mary P Buettner
Country of Origin: England
Pets: None
Talents: Greek Literature, interest in strategy, half decent shot with a silver bow
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze bow
Personality: Emily is generally quiet, keeping herself to herself. She has a stubborn streak and is very determined. She believes that she has to be ten times as good at a task than everyone else in order so that she can be counted and treated as an equal. Emily possesses a sick sense of humour, with a dislike for normal humans. She is usually kind unless teased or questions asked to her about topics she views as sensitive. She has a tendency to be quite shy and reluctant to talk or argue with other Hunters particularly if there are plenty of people around or if they are arguing.
Flaws:
> Afraid of water because she cannot swim
> Lacks confidence
> Heavily claustrophobic, will not go into tunnels or narrow caverns without plenty of persuasion
> Reluctant to ask people for help when she needs it
> Very stubborn  
> Dislikes normal humans for the mocking that she received due to her broken leg back at school.
> Can be quite bitter at times
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before Hunt*: Before joining the Hunters relatively recently Emily lived at Camp Half-Blood. Though personally she would not call it a life, just existing or surviving does not equal that in her own opinion. She wasn't able to do much on the account of her old injury which she received as a result of saving one of her step brothers from being hit by a car. The leg never really healed fully or well, meaning Emily was forced to move around on crutches for most of the time. She never left the safety of the camp as a result, because she couldn't move fast enough to either avoid the monsters nor fight them effectively. She made only a few close friends but she preferred to keep to herself, be quiet and generally hope that she wouldn't be noticed by the other Demigods, Gods themselves or any prophecies.
RP Example*:
Emily had argued with several of the other Hunters mostly about trying to go swimming, which she wouldn't. Mostly because Emily couldn't which happened to be because she had a phobia of the water. She kept her distance, preferring to not go near the water unless she could see the bottom and Emily knew for a solid fact that the water would never go above her knees.
It was all to easy to imagine herself drowning, so Emily argued with the Hunters before storming off they wanted to go swimming, they wanted to teach her to swim and Emily did not want any of that.
Any notes about your characters: Has a slight limp in her right leg relating to an old injury in her pre-Hunter life.

You need 5 sentences for Life Before the Hunt. Otherwise at first glance this seems fine.

Cool I have edited it, hope it is all okay thanks.

Approved!