Valkyrie Aiden

Name: Valkyrie Aiden
Age:17
Gender: Male
Eyes: Teal
Hair: Black and striped with brown on right side of head
Height: 6"0"
Body Type: slim
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent: Ashley Aiden
Country of Origin: United States of America
Pets: Dog named Sparky
Talents: Lightning fast reaction times
Weapon**: longsword: Breakneck
Personality: open-minded, nice, funny
Flaws: Very energetic, sometimes irritating towards others
Abilities: expert swordsman
Powers: To create illusion of death and destruction to terrorize (Three post use, two post cooldown), can shadow-travel (5 times use, 3 post cooldown) for a maximum of 3 blocks. Can raise skeletal soldiers which can only be used once every topic. Soldiers come with celestial bronze armor and swords and die after 6 hits.
Life Before Camp*: Life was typical, always getting into trouble, always blaming it on others. I also have been arrested quite a couple times, and my parents ditched out on me, until I found camp half-blood ( found by a satyr and brought to camp half blood for a "better life"
RP Example*: I walked to my favorite red chair and plopped myself in it, "what a day" I said. Carson walks into the dark, gloomy room and looked at me in th corner and said "Dude, there's still another game of capture the flag in 10 minutes". I replied, "I'm am too exhausted to do anything else today I just want to go throw myself on a comfortable mattress and sleep like a baby"

Talents: lightning fast reaction time isn't a talent, a talent is more of something the person is good at like a sport or skipping rocks.

Weapon: is the long sword celestial bronze?

Personality: needs to be two detailed sentences

Flaws: you need a minimum of three flaws (so include one more please)

Abilities: this would be an example of a talent not an ability

Powers:
What do you mean by illusion of death (no to the destruction sorry)? Can it be resisted, how does it work? Does he need to touch the person of what? Cool down needs to be longer than how long it lasts
Shadow Travel same thing
How many soldiers can he raise at one time?

Life Before Camp: this needs to be a minimum of 5 sentences

Rp Sample: this also needs to be a minimum of 5 sentences