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by Aisling Blaise 8/3/2010, 11:50 amIm done with writting them untill im sure of some event
Last edited by *Annabeth Chase on 8/20/2010, 5:01 pm; edited 1 time in total
5 posters
Im deleting My stories While I still can
Aisling Blaise- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 12261
Age : 24
Registration date : 2010-03-10
Last edited by *Annabeth Chase on 8/20/2010, 5:01 pm; edited 1 time in total
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
Majestic Unicorn Queen
Number of posts : 43512
Age : 2022
Registration date : 2008-09-13
A minor grammar mistake or two, but this is good.
Chuck- Pokemon
Number of posts : 21941
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-03-13
I think you meant Atlantic Ocean, not the Pacific. ;) Other than that it's pretty good!
BallinLeBron6- Dedicated Member
Number of posts : 1621
Age : 24
Registration date : 2010-01-26
Intresting.
Alfred F. Jones- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 11217
Age : 25
Registration date : 2010-01-13
I like it. It's good.
Aisling Blaise- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 12261
Age : 24
Registration date : 2010-03-10
Yhea i kinda noticed that, I have a dum brother, he wouldnt give the right answers to locations and grammar issues.
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