ANY AND ALL CRITIASISM IS WELCOME, BUT DO NOT SAY MY STORY SUCKS PLEASE,IF THAT IS WHAT YOU THINK KEEP IT TO YOURSELF. I'm sorry if i havent used your character yet, i will eventually get to it..im just gona put the prolouge up first anyway to see what you people think, if i get more than three comments asking for the rest i'll put them up as i write them (i have only gotten to chapter two)
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PROLOUGE:
You’ve all heard of the American Civil War, or the War Between the States, right? Well you only know half of the story. The side the presidents and generals want you to know. We are here to tell you the other half, the better half …the more deadly half. How do we know this, you ask, well it’s simple; we lived it, this is our lives. You’re also probably asking what you mean who and we; well we are Demi-Gods. Or people who are Half-God and Half-Human. Or simply put, Half Bloods. Yeah we exist, and we fought our own war, behind the lines, our own battles, with our own alliances and reasons to fight.
Although we may have some small reasons to fight, the main one is the same, slavery; and what to do about it. There are half bloods fighting for the union, which are as follows: Greek Demi-Gods, Egyptian Demi-Gods, and the Norse Demi-Gods. At the same time there are half bloods fighting for the confederacy who are as follows: Demi-Titans (who are kids of the titans, not the Gods) both Greek and Roman, and the Roman Demi-Gods themselves.
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PROLOUGE:
You’ve all heard of the American Civil War, or the War Between the States, right? Well you only know half of the story. The side the presidents and generals want you to know. We are here to tell you the other half, the better half …the more deadly half. How do we know this, you ask, well it’s simple; we lived it, this is our lives. You’re also probably asking what you mean who and we; well we are Demi-Gods. Or people who are Half-God and Half-Human. Or simply put, Half Bloods. Yeah we exist, and we fought our own war, behind the lines, our own battles, with our own alliances and reasons to fight.
Although we may have some small reasons to fight, the main one is the same, slavery; and what to do about it. There are half bloods fighting for the union, which are as follows: Greek Demi-Gods, Egyptian Demi-Gods, and the Norse Demi-Gods. At the same time there are half bloods fighting for the confederacy who are as follows: Demi-Titans (who are kids of the titans, not the Gods) both Greek and Roman, and the Roman Demi-Gods themselves.