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    Post by -Sharpie- 4/19/2011, 6:37 am

    Prolouge: My Death(I sometimes title my prolouge)
    You know how we're all told that we're gonna grow up, and be happy and get married? Well, that doesn't happen to all of us. I died at a young age. I only lived to see my 15th birthday, and trust me, my life was short and unhappy.
    My mom died giving birth to me. My dad, well... He hated me since the day I was born until the day I died. He killed me actually... My big brother was the only break I ever got from this sadness in life. He was the reason I lived to see my fifteenth birthday, but no more. He, in fact, only lived to see his 17th year. He died, protecting me, and I will never forgive myself.
    My dad was crazy in the head ever since mom died, or maybe before. (We'd never know.) We kept him out of the hospital by hiding everything he did to us, or more honestly, me.
    When I was fourteen, I got pregnant, and everyone called me the meanest of names. But they didn't know the truth. They didn't know my father r**** me.
    When I died, I was having my baby at home. We hadn't known until it was too late that she was coming. My father refused to listen or let me go to the hospital. My brother, Greg, tried to take me, but my father refused to let him, and he... he... he never saw it coming, until he was lying on the floor, bleeding to death. I had known me and my baby were next, but I couldn't run. I couldn't do anything but lie there as he killed us.
    He went for the baby inside me, killing her first, by how, I can't recall. (Nor do I want to.) He then left me in my bedroom, windows locked, blinds down, and doors locked. He left me to die slowly and painfully while the only other sound in the room was Greg dying slowly, too. I was actually happy hen the room feel silent. That meant his suffering was over. I knew my big brother had gone to heaven. I was sure of it. But, I wasn't going anywhere. I had unfinished business to do... For my child and brother.
    The lights went black as I had made my promise... My promise of revenge on the living soul of pure evil. My promise to avenge the deaths that my father.... No he isn't my father anymore... That George Crepler caused.
    My name is Rue Shay, and this is my story of revenge...
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    Post by SonofChaos 4/19/2011, 6:59 am

    EPicness of epicosity!!!!!!
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    Post by -Sharpie- 4/19/2011, 7:00 am

    haha:) I try my hardest to be epic:)
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    Post by Maria Apollo 4/19/2011, 7:40 am

    thats amazing nicci
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    Post by Tom 4/19/2011, 9:44 am

    Like it!!!
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    Post by Dolorous Edd 4/19/2011, 4:03 pm

    Very nice. suspenseful too if i say so myself.
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    Post by -Sharpie- 4/19/2011, 5:09 pm

    :D thanks guys!
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    Post by Panda Coffee 4/19/2011, 9:46 pm

    Love it!
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    Post by annabeth13<3 4/19/2011, 11:51 pm

    Really good:D
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    Post by -Sharpie- 4/22/2011, 3:33 am

    Chapter One:
    I never thought once that he'd ever kill Grwg, but he did. I wasn't at all shocked he killed me. What shocked me was he hadn't done it earlier on. I mean, if he wanted me dead, wouldn't he have done it sooner? Or, maybe that was the perfect way to kill me. wait until I was having my baby, and say that was how I died. I don't know how he's going to disguise Greg's death, but I know he will.
    My most interesting and first[i] exprince as a ghost was all the ghost passing through the Veil. The Veil is the only thing that seperates the alive world and the dead world. And oh, not to mention, the Veil has been torn. The only reason I know this was that I met one friendly ghost, and that's all. (I could have met more, but I didn't want to bother them. [i]He bother me first, in fact.
    "Hi, you must be Rue. Hi, I'm Darren." I'd turned around to face him, and I was expectng a whole lot difference picture than I got.
    He did have a friendly smile, but that wasn't what I hadn't expected. Unlike most ghost, he had scars. His main one (on his face) was a long scar running from the bottom of his left eye, to his jaw. The other one, which was visible was on his chest, which I tried not to stare at. It ran from where his heart had been when he was living, to his abs. I made a point to not stare, because even in life, I'd believed guys should keep their shirts on, but I usually kept that to myself.
    "Hi, I am Rue. Pleased to meet you." I'd told him.
    "Ditto. Anyways, you weren't exactly quiet about your death, so if I were you, I'd aviod most adults, exspecially the women, if you don't want them fussing and crying over you. Not every girl dies at fifteen by their father's own hands. Not every fifteen year old girl is raped by her father. And oh, not to mention, not every girl watches her beloved brother die, and then dies sowly herself. I've never heard of it, until you came along." He'd told me.
    "Oh..." Was all I could say.
    He looked at me sadly, and suddenly, I hugged him. I didn't know why, I barely knew him, but I did. I guess I'd wanted one from someone besides my only brother my whole life. I'd never gotten one from Mama. I guessed, if I went to heaven after all this, and Mama was there, she'd be the first person I'd hug.
    Darren hadn't pushed me away yet, so I detached myself from him, and hung my head.
    "I'm sorry, I just never really hugged anyone before." I told him.
    "It's alright... Hey... Do you want to hear my story?" Darren had asked, almostly shyly.
    "Sure." I said.
    He looked at me and led me to a secluded spot....
    (Sorry if I misused any words. Tell me if I did...)
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    Post by Fist of Shadows 4/22/2011, 6:56 am

    Unlike most ghost, he had scars.
    Should be
    Unlike most ghosts, he had scars.


    "It's alright... Hey... Do you want to hear my story?" Darren had asked, almostly shyly.
    Should be
    "It's alright... Hey... Do you want to hear my story?" Darren had asked, nearly shyly.

    I like the story in general, not like most the way I like it. Only thing is, it's a little short.
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    Post by -Sharpie- 4/22/2011, 7:43 am

    I'M NOT FINISHED YET! GOD! IS THERE NEVER A TIME WHEN SOMEONE CAN SHUT THEIR MOUTH AND LET ME DO WHAT I THINK IS NESSACARY AND MAYBE THAT'S HOW I WANTED IT TO SOUND. JUST THINK FOR ONCE!
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    Post by Kendall 4/22/2011, 11:11 am

    Nicci, calm down.
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    Post by Fist of Shadows 4/22/2011, 11:38 am

    .-. Sorry

    Thought when it said "(Sorry if I misused any words. Tell me if I did...)" I could tell you :(
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    Post by -Sharpie- 4/22/2011, 12:47 pm

    he didn't have to correct me! im sorry, but he corrected statements not wrds. and I meant big words such as seculuded (sp)
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    Post by annabeth13<3 4/22/2011, 1:11 pm

    I like it:)
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    Post by Fist of Shadows 4/22/2011, 2:05 pm

    Again, sorry.. I didn't know.. :(
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    Post by -Sharpie- 4/22/2011, 5:07 pm

    well, I'm sorry too. I've been going through a lot, so sorry I snapped at you...
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    Post by Fist of Shadows 4/22/2011, 6:14 pm

    It's ok, I was rude :(

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