proxyboy's Characters

Demigod Form:

Name:Stephen Angeles
Age:13
Gender:Male
Eyes:Hazel
Hair:Brown
Height:5'1"
Body Type:lean,little bit muscular
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Triton
Mortal Parent:Stephanie Haney
Country of Origin:United States of America
Pets:Beagle Dog named Buddy
Talents:swimming,reading
Weapon**:celestial bronze short sword named honor
Flaws:rushes, doesnt think of a plan,hayes getting taunted
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):can breathe under water for about 30 minutes, make water bend to my will(uses hands),has to concentrate on water to control,can go about a mile away, can only do this for about 10 minutes (after must rest for at least 30 minutes to use his water bending power),can heal small cuts and wounds in water(but nothing major like a cut liver or something like that)
Life Before CHB*:Regular life before a satyr brought him to camp half blood. He didnt really care about his father. Loved his mother very much. A week before school ends strange looking creatures attack him. Life was never the same.
RP Example*:As he ran through the woods with a strange satyr, something was clearly following them. Drowsy from sleep he stumbles through the woods. As the satyr urges him to run faster, the creature was coming closer. With desperation he they both ran as fast as they could. Arriving at Camp Half-Blood the young boy looked stunned.
Any notes about your characters:Isnt good with talking to girls, blushes too much

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Alright but is my character ok? If so what do i do now?

I don't think you can use Briareus. I recommend Triton to fit your powers.

Why would Briareus not be allowed, Ellie?

Triton? Ok

He's one of the Giantes. I'm not sure if they allow that.

Better?

Mhm.
How does he bend water? (how much, what shape, how far away, etc.)
How often and for how long can he bend water?

There better?

Does he have to use his hands?
You need to have some distance limit.
How much water can he control at once?
How often can he bend water?

Ok check again please

How long can he breathe underwater?

For about 30 minutes why? Please approve

Approve

Demigod Form:

Name:Maria Angeles
Age:13
Gender:Female
Eyes:Light Blue
Hair:Brown
Height:5'2"
Body Type:Lean
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Triton
Mortal Parent:Stephanie Haney
Country of Origin:United States of America
Pets:None
Talents:Singing, charming boys
Weapon**:Celestial bronze Dagger named Faith
Flaws: Fights too much with her brother, often blurts personal things out, and trusts people too fast.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):Can breathe under water for 30 minutes, can bend water to her will for about 10 minutes(after must rest for about 30 minutes), can make water go as far as 5 miles, can heal with water(only minor wounds), can make a giant whirlpool wit water(most powerful. It is as big as big as 14feet wide and 14feet long. Sadly only lasts for 5 minutes).
Life Before CHB*:Life was simple for her. Charming boys to do everythong for her, but very strong. She always annoyed her brother. But after he was taken from school she got worried and looked for him. That is when she discovered Camp Half Blood.
RP Example*:As she ran through the forest following a satyr she spotted her brother. She ran after them. As the thorns in her hair and the branches slapping against her head she followed until she saw Camp Half Blood. She then discovered who she really was.
Any notes about your characters: Stephen Angeles' sister

YOu have to have at least 3 flaws.

Ok fixed

Worst wound she can heal in water? Most powerful thing she can do with water?

Ok fixed

Can she heal others with the water or just herself?

... Uhm, that's generally what people do when they control water. I meant most powerful thing she could do WITH it (ie: make a large wave).

Oh ok..... Fixed

How big is the whirlpool and how long does it last?

Ok fixed