Demetri's Characters

Name: Demetri Taylor
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: strange mix of blue, gold, and brown
Hair: black with blonde stands
Height: 5'4"
Body Type: slim, muscular
Skin Color: Copper-colored
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Diana Taylor
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: Polux the pegasus
Talents: archery, ground fighter
Weapon**: golden sword with platnim hilt
Flaws: Arrogance
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): light blasts that drain, past tellings
Life Before CHB*: Demetri was raised in the woods by her mother after her house was burned down. Ever since she has vowed to not let anyone upset her or pay the price.
RP Example*: Demetri nidded. "Yes," she said. "It's time for battle. Arm yourselves!"
Any notes about your characters: N/A

Add two more flaws.
Your life before CHB and RP example need to be 5 sentences long.
Explain what past tellings are.
How many times a day can she do the light blast.
How distructive are the light blasts.

Name: Demetri Taylor
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: greenish
Hair: black with blonde stands
Height: 5'4"
Body Type: slim, muscular
Skin Color: olive
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Diana Taylor
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: Polux the pegasus
Talents: archery, ground fighter, "golden throat" (can sing really good)
Weapon**: celestial bronze sword with platnim hilt, bow and arrows, siren srrows (arrows that make a high pitched noise that can kill two draceana)
Flaws: Arrogance, Trust (she trusts anyone who is a "friend" but her trust blinds her), Confidence(Demetri thinks she can do anything without a problem)
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): light blasts that drain her energy (these can only be attempted three times a day and can cause temporary blindess that lasts one to three minutes. Lightblasts are only ten seconds long each.), past tellings (visions from the past, only seen in dreams, of other people and herself. The people are not randomly chosen, only the people she has on her mind. They usually last until she wakes up and happen randomly.)
Life Before CHB*: Demetri was raised in the woods by her mother after her house was burned down by one of Hepheastus' automatons. Demetri's mother has been known to tamper with the Lord of Blacksmith's automatons and one ended up going rogue, setting the house alight. The fire was meant to kill Demetri, showing her mother how it feels to have her pride destroyed. Her mother is frequently on the run from all of Hepheastus' gadgets and tricks. Ever since, Demetri has vowed to not let anyone upset her or they will pay the price.
RP Example*: Demetri nodded. "Yes," she said. "It's time for battle. Arm yourselves!"
Any notes about your characters: Demetri is known for her bad temper

You dont have to repost the form.
Theres a little 'edit' button on the side of your post. Use that, and then reply with a 'fixed'.

oh ok. do i have to do it or am i in the clearing?

Please don't double post; have a little patience. And you also don't need to make more than one topic per character.

Please explain how trust and confidence are flaws. Does she have too much or too little of either?

Golden swords won't work on monsters. Only Celestial Bronze will (if you're not of Underworld descent).

Light blasts that can wipe out a forest is too powerful. And the siren thing might be a little much.

Can I have siren arrows instead? And light blast can wipe out....a rock about ten feet in diameter?

Still a bit much. Think of how much damage it could do to a human.

And what are siren arrows, exactly?

~ACHEMS~


I would like to add in...


HOW BE TRUST AND CONFIDENCE FLAWS!?


Eh?


Thankers.

Trust can be dangerous--- like how Annabeth trusted Luke, but he betrayed her. And you can always have to much confidence....It's like you say, "Hey! A bridge! I'm gonna jump it!" Then you fall to your death because of confidence. And as for my arrows: they are high pitched and can only destroy one or two draceana. My light blast...yeah they can only wipe out a human. How's that?

Again. Please don't double-post.

Wiping out a human is too much power... it can be considered power play.

ugh IDK THEN!!! I'm seriously trying, but I can't do it! And I already covered the double post...IT WON'T HAPPEN AGAIN! I'm sorry! All I wanted was to go to Camp Half-blood. Whatever. Her light blasts can only kill a nat ok? Is that allright? :(


Can her light blasts kill something reasonable? You are not helping me here. Can I please have some kind of guidance? I'm still knew here. Right now I am looking up all types of Greek Mythology trying to get re-educated. I forgot most things.
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- OK temporary blindness. Sorry about blowing up like that... Me and Demetri aren't known as the "girls with the bad attitudes" for nothing....

Sheesh... Calm down. I'm only trying to help you get your character approved.

The light blasts could be just busts of light... maybe causing temporary blindness? Or you could just remove the power....


PLEASE stop double-posting... use the edit button instead.

*facepalm* There all edited

What does "golden throat" mean in her talents?

How long does the light blasts last? And how long will the temporary blindness last?

How does the "past-tellings" power work? Does she just sleep and learn random bits of random people's pasts in her dreams?

edited

Five to ten minutes long for the blindness is too long. We normally allow three minutes or under.

edited

STOP double-posting. You've been told twice already. :/

Her house can't be burned down by Hephaestus, and they sure as Hades can't always have Hephaestus trying to kill her. You could always say a rogue automaton or something.

How long are her visions? Do they happen randomly?

OK here's the truth---How do I post without double posting? Is this considered double posting?

No, it's not. But posting twice in a row is what we call "double-posting."

Please answer Kendall's other two questions in your form.

thank you :D

Approved. Finalllyyyy.

Name: Mason van Trump
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: Light Gray
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Height: 5'7"
Body Type: Muscular arms and legs, His body is lean
Skin Color: Deep Tan
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: Robert van Trump
Country of Origin: USA, Brooklyn, New York
Pets:N/A
Talents: Mason is gifted in Math
Weapon**: Two CB Knives (identical in size, weight, etc.)
Flaws: Usually slow on catching comments (rude or not), will risk everything for something he cares about, looks down on himself (doubts himself)
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):N/A
Life Before CHB*: Before Mason was six years old, he was always called special. His mother suddenly dissapeared soon after his birth and his father, Robert, worked his hardest for his new son. Mason has always struggled in reading and paying attention in class. At age six, he blew up his first school and fought his fist monster. The trend continued until age 10, when he ran away from home. Mason has always thought that he was dangerous and never trusted himself around his father. He grew up in the streets of downtown Brooklyn, fending for himself and learning new things on his own. Mason didn't want to endanger everyone he knew - it always happened. For four years he taught himself. For four years he was at four different schools. This would never happen again, he promised himself. I am not a monster.RP Example*: Mason ran as fast as he could towards the field. He saw the field shimmer and new he had made it. Mason limped towards the property line and hoped in was the right place. He collapsed inside the property line and blacked out.
Any notes about your characters: Mason is Dyslexic and ADHD