Fly's characters

Name:Justin Quinones
Age:11
Gender:Male
Eyes:Grey
Hair:Blonde
Height:4'4"
Body Type:Slender
Skin Color:tanish
God Parent:Athena
Mortal Parent:Frank Sakelarios
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:Hawk named Hunter
Talents:Running, Can design planes, crusie ships, and buildings , and playing on the Computer
Skills:Run fast, chess, and building with legos
Weapon**:Bow and Celetel broze Arrows
Flaws:I Tick Alot of people off, Freak out alot, and I have very low stamina.
Powers(must relate to god parent):none
Life Before CHB*:I lived in Carson City,Nevada. I did well at Seeliger Elametry School. I loved flying on planes. I loved to jump bikes. I got yelled at by my sister every day.
RP Example*:I kicked a rubber mouse. I guess it was a prank. I kindda like mice though. I layed on my bunk. Then got up and left
Any notes about your characters:Like to chew gum and sometimes very stubern

you need to fill out Life before and RP example, They both need to be 5 sentences long
Add more flaws and powers, you should have about 3
Add more talents and skills.

So i can do anther

You can fill it out in another post or put it in using the edit button.

Done

Those aren't powers. If you have none, put none. What you have in powers belongs in talents/skills.

Life Before CHB needs to be SENTENCES, not fragments. Don't take shortcuts. :/

Done i think

Add another flaw. Physical is preferred.

done i think, agian

Approved.

Name:Tyler Hammick
Age:13
Gender:Male
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Drity Blonde
Height:4'10"
Body Type:Slender
Skin Color:Light Tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:Hannah Hammick
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:Hawk named Smokey
Talents:Archery, Running, and Rapping
Skills:Archery, writing raps, Soasil
Weapon**:Celestial broze Dagger, and Bow and Celestial bronze arrows
Flaws:Near sighted, asthma, and low stamina
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):None
Life Before CHB*:Tyler did well at EVMS. He loved to listin to rap miusic andlook at airplanes. Swimming was a hobbie as were modle planes. Loved to wear hats all the time.
RP Example*:I doove off a diving board. Dove through the water. Swam up and said, "How was that?" My best friend said "Good." I said, "Nice. I am going agian."
Any notes about your characters:Nope

Use complete sentences, please. Your Life Before CHB describes his life before going to camp. :/

And do you mean Celestial bronze? And btw, no talking to hawks.

Done

Don't double-post. EVER.

Kendall wrote:Use complete sentences, please. Your Life Before CHB describes his life before going to camp. :/

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Done again

Entirely not what I asked for....

But whatever.

And your flaws-- dyslexia and ADHD are not flaws.

Done I think

Approved.

Justin is gone so...

Name:Lance nikiki
Age:12
Gender:male
Eyes:blue
Hair:brown
Height:5'0"
Body Type:skinny
Skin Color:Hawaiin
God Parent:triton
Mortal Parent:Evalyn nikiki
Country of Origin:Honalulu,Oauh,Hawaii,USA
Pets:An Orca named Killer
Talents:Surfing
Skills:Surfing, swimming
Weapon**:sorwd and dagger
Flaws:asthma,random spaz attacks, Color blind
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):controlling water for an hour then pssing out and talking to sea mamals and beathing under water
Life Before CHB*:Lance went surfing everyday no matter what. He also helped his mom do things around the
island. He had to go to a boarding school on Hawaii. He was on the school surfing team. He hates airplanes but loves boats.
RP Exampple*:I go for a wave. I jump on my board. Go for the barrel. I go inside. Do a go around. Then I fall off the board.
Any notes about your characters:none

Dude, USE COMPLETE SENTENCES.

You need limits for ALL your powers, plus two more flaws.

Sorry I'm on an iPad and I must have forgotten that I needed 3 flaws

Done

What's the most powerful thing he can make water do?

Lift in the air and thron at someone make the tides higher

He can make water float mid-air and throw that at people?

Yes if he's near water but it's only the size of a soccer ball