Fly's characters

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Fly Listen to me please try not to use the same flaws that you use on every charrie for can You please think of differnt flaws for once?

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Name: Chase White
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Eyes: Green
Hair: Orange
Height: 5’ 0”
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Zelos
Mortal Parent: Ace White
Country of Origin: Utah
Pets: N/A
Talents: Snowboarding
Weapon**: two one foot daggers and a three foot sword
Flaws: over confident, asthma, over competitive
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before CHB*: Chase lived with his dad in Salt lake City, Utah.Chase loved to go snowboarding with his dad. When Cahse was 7 he and his dad were flying to LA and the plane crashed killing his dad. Chase went to live with his aunt in St. Luis. Chase went to a public school where he ment a satyr that lead Chase to camp.
RP Example*:I walk in to school and put my stuff in my locker. I walk in to class and get lectured about not doing my homework.I sit in my seat and talk with one of my friends. The teacher starts talking about accient Greece. I loved History class at that time of the year.
Any notes about your characters:n/a

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Name: Chance Lear
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Height: 5’ 8 ½”
Body Type: Slender
Skin Color: Hispanic
God Parent: Demeter
Mortal Parent: Jose Lear
Country of Origin: Canada
Pets: A golden retriever named Dug
Talents: Planting, Drawing, Singing
Weapon**: 3 Foot CB sword and a 12 inch dagger
Flaws: Blind, Anger Issues,
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):N/A
Life Before CHB*: Chance was born and raised in Vancouver, British Columbia. Chase’s dad got married soon after Demeter left. Chance thought his step-mom was his real mom. Chance was blind at the age of ten because he and his step-mom were in a car crash and glass cut Chance’s eyes. A year after that he got his guide dog, Dug.
RP Example*: I walk into school with Dug guiding my down to my locker. I open my locker and get my binder out for first period. My history teacher walked down the hall towards my locker. I shut my locker to go hang out with my friends. My history teacher walks in the office and I sigh a sigh of relief.
Any notes about your characters:N/A

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Name:Chase Bucknell
Age:13
Gender:Male
Eyes:Red
Hair:Blonde
Height:5'3"
Body Type:Musculer
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Ares
Mortal Parent:Mavee Bucknell
Country of Origin:Palmdale,CA,USA
Pets:N/A
Talents:Archrey, Hunting
Weapon**:Bow and Arrows
Flaws:Asthma, Near sighted, Full of himself, Color blind
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):N/A
Life Before CHB*:He was born on December 20th, 1997. He lived with his mom in Palmdale, Califronia, untill Chase turned 10. They moved to Salt Lake City. They went to NYC for vaction the next year. He got atacked by a Cyclops. After that his mom took him to camp.
RP Example*:"Mom why are we moveing?" I ask. "Because I got a better job." She awnsers "But-" "No buts! Start packing." "Fine." I curse under my breath.
Any notes about your characters:N/A

Add one more sentence to the RP example.

You know, most of your characters have the "Asthma" flaw. Add another flaw.

Edited

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Name: Tristan
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black
Height: 5'2”
Body Type: Slender
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent: Jack Johnson
Country of Origin: England
Pets: N/A
Talents: Running, Speaks fluent French, Greek (New and ancient), and German.
Weapon**: CB Sword
Flaws: Near sighted, Anger issues, too talkitive.
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Magic (Most powerful transprting a medium dog a mile. most 50), Shadow travel (50 nm or 43.47 m), Invisibility (An hour rest an hour use)Can turn people into a bunny for half an hour.
Life Before CHB*: Lived with his dad in London. At school he was one of the popular kids. His dad worked for British Airways .He went with his dad on bisness trips. He learned Greek at a young age.
RP Example*: I walked to school with my friend. Knowing I got to go to Germany today. I say “Yay.” “What?” He asks. I reply, “I get to go back to Germany, today.”
Any notes about your characters: British accent

Infected? What?

And what does "an hour rest an hour use" mean? It sounds a little mashed up....

He can be invisable for an hour then he has to rest for an hour before he can be invisable agian.

And how many times a day can he be invisible? An hour may become too long.

Five?

Five times for an hour each? An hour would be too long.

Five times a day. 45 minutes?

If it's five times and it's 45 mins each it has to be shorter. 15 minutes at max.

Okay, 15 minutes. Anything else

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Name: Alex
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Eyes: Green
Hair: Dark brown
Height: 5 foot 5
Body Type: Lean yet muscular
Skin Color: light brown
God Parent: Enyo-Goddess of war
Mortal Parent: Pablo Gonzales
Country of Origin: Chicago, USA
Pets: none
Talents: Running, Hand fighting, knife and sword handling
Weapon**: Two CB Daggers and one two and a half foot sword.
Flaws: Over confident, Asthma, over competitive, color blind, his left foot is prone to injury.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*: He lived with his dad in Chicago since he was two. His dad was in the army when he met Alex's mom. Alex got in trouble at school a lot. Alex spent time with his grandma when his dad was deployed. When Alex was 13 is dad died from a road side bomb.
RP Example*:”Dad promise me you’ll be safe,” I said. “I will,” He promises. I hug him, and he hugs back. He walks down the driveway. I watch as he leaves. I wish I could go with him and meet my mom.
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