Gwen Mcarthy

Name:Gwen Mcarthy
Age:14
Gender:female
Eyes:bluish green
Hair:brunette
Height:5'6
Body Type:lean
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:Rose Mcarthy
Country of Origin:united states
Pets:a jack russel dog named Stevie
Talents:playing music and archery
Weapon**: Celestial bronze bow and arrow, and celestial bronze sword
Flaws: to loyal,arrogant, and can never keep calm
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*:Gwen survied 3 foster homes with her little brother Jake. Before their mother died in a tragic car crash, they lived in a two bedroom aprartment in brooklyn,New york.One day when Gwen was 10 and Jake was 8, her mom went to work in the music shop,while her and her brother where at school,when they got out they waited for their mom to pick them up, then finally a car came and they hoped it was their mom but it was child services, and they told them their mom died and took to a adoption house.After what that moment Gwen promised Jake she will never leave him.After 4 years , Gwen and Jake gone through lots of strange things, when a satyr came to their new adoption house and took them to Camp Half-Blood.
RP Example*: I ran as fast i could to my litle brother Jake before the monsters we left behind in the park could get us, When i finally catched up with him, i saw that jake was starring at something, then i found out what he was starring at." Thats Camp Half-blood, Welcome home" Bush the Satyr said andtogether all three of us walked up the hill
Any notes about your characters:can never get sunburned and when ever she's in the sun her eye's shine bright

By blue/green eyes, do you mean one is green and one is blue, or do you mean that they are a bluish green color?
You need at least 3 flaws.
Prophecies are not allowed to be a power.
Your weapons must be celestial bronze.

Ok,I'll fix it

Can you go through your Life Before CHB and put periods in their proper places there? You seem to have one continuous sentence for most of it, and you're supposed to have at least five.

Are her arrow tips Celestial bronze?

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What breed is the dog and how old?

What metal is the sword?

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Please don't comment until you have made the changes asked. Thanks.

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