Zachattac's characters

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If she knows people's likes and dislikes naturally, for example observing them, then I don't think that'd be a power.

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Name:Lamont Cranston 
Age:15
Gender:male
Eyes:gray 
Hair:black
Height:6:1
Body Type:Lean, but strong
Skin Color:olive
God Parent:Melinoe
Mortal Parent:?
Country of Origin:USA 
Pets:n/a
Talents:being mysterious, reading, hiding, swordfighting
Weapon**:Stygian iron Kantana and dagger that turns into watch
Flaws:people knowing alot about him, fear of needles, being in crowds
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): shadow travel (three times a day 35 miles, once a week 200miles)
Can walk through solid objects 2 feet thick 3 times a day 1 foot or less 6 times ten feet once a month
Life Before CHB*:before camp half blood Lamont lived in a run down orphanage on the banks of the James river in Richmond. Slowly all the other kids left the orphanage and got adopted.  His only friend had been Katrina who was also his girlfriend. He likes to walk on the banks of the river and be in the forest. He never liked the orphanage but when it got burned down he cried for his home.
RP Example*:I slowly walk along the banks of the James river heading north thinking of what had happened.  Someone or something had taken his home and it was going to pay.  Suddenly I stopped, there was a tiny vial in the water with paper in it. Carefully I opened the vial and read the paper that was in Greek. Wait, I thought to my self I don't know Greek yet I under stand this. Quickly I throw the paper down and run due north to NYC.
Any notes about your characters:mysterious, quiet, can be violent, likes to be in the back
  

We don't really allow invisibility as a power.

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  Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:


Name:Jackson "cool" delta

Age:14

Gender:male

Eyes:blue

Hair:blond

Height:5:11

Body Type:athletic strong

Skin Color:caucasian 

God Parent:Apollo 

Mortal Parent:Megan delta

Country of Origin:USA 
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Pets:a border collie named shep

Talents:running, sports, electric guitar, archery

Weapon**:12" knife named Columbus and a bow that turns into a necklace named cincy

Flaws:being betrayed, swimming, being a loner

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):can heal 3in cuts five times a day

Life Before CHB*:Jackson grew up in Lebanon, Ohio which is north of Cincinnati and south of Dayton. Jackson led a fine life for a half blood until he turned  13. Head of the football team, band leader and the heartthrob of all girls in Lebanon. But when he turned 13 on that August day things went horribly wrong.  His house burnt down killing his mom, then my stepsister was killed in a shooting. I then fled east not knowing what I was doing.

RP Example*: I had finally made it to new York, where for some reason I had gotten the notion to come here. Then suddenly a monster straight from the devil jumped out behind me and tried to bite my head, quickly I ran toward the metropolis when suddenly I stopped at something much worse, water!  Summoning all my courage I then jumped on a barge that was heading to central park. I thought I had avoided the beast when I looked behind me and saw it swimming after the barge. I then calmly nocked an arrow and shot it in the head while smiling at the teenage girl staring at me.

Any notes about your characters:likes to be in the popular group, hyper, friendly, gets along with most people, loves to impress girls, and people more important than him 

Do you have a 6th character slot? We only give you five free ones.

Got rid of Lamont

You should take him out of your signature, then.

K

Playing the electric guitar "perfectly" is definitely not a power. Define how broken those bones are, as well as "deep" and "minor" cuts.

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3in cuts as in long or deep?

Long

How deep can the cuts be?

One inch

Name:Richard michal smith
Age:17
Gender:male
Eyes:green/blue
Hair:dirty blond with a black and red highlight 
Height:6:0
Body Type:muscular
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:ares
Mortal Parent:dead never knew her
Country of Origin:new York, new York 
Pets:n/a
Talents:swordfighting, wrestling, mechanics, reading, archery, concealment of weapons
Weapon**:scythe and long sword made from CB
Flaws:Hieghts, spiders, losing, needles
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):none
Life Before CHB*:before camp half blood Richard lived in downtown queens. He had a rough life and was an orphan. He joined a wrestling and fencing team and got very good at it. He also got an interest in motorcycles and mechanics at a young age. His only friend was murdered in a gang fight right before he arrived at CHB. Since then he ha had some anger issues.
RP Example*: I walk down the alley looking behind me. Then suddenly a goon jumps in front of me and punches my gut. I doubleover then kick his leg so that he falls. When he falls I haul him off the ground and punch him in the face. He falls over asleep.
Any notes about your characters: none 

So for his flaws, he's afraid of all those things?

Do you have a slot for this, Zach?

Yes and I killed a character

Which one? And next time, try to have less flaws about fears... Maybe something physical or a bad habit or something.

Jackson