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Zachattac's characters
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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And when was this?
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Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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Allison
Name: Allison (Ally) (unkwown last name)
Age: 15
Birthdate: October 5
Gender: female
Eyes: black/blue
Hair: brunette
Height: 5:8
Body Type: fit, skinny (picture)
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent:all she knows about her mortal parent is that he was Japanese
Country of Origin: Japan
Pets: N/A
Personality:fun loving, daredevil, smart, pretty, dangerous, laughs a lot, isn't serious unless on the battle field. She always smiles an is kind and caring. She also loves to make noise and sing. She is also autistic
Clothing: When not in combat she prefers to wear blue jeans, a red tshirt, black band necklace and a white jacket. Or dark jeans, a long sleeve black tshirt and a charm necklace, with the charm being a skull.
Talents: singing, sword fighting, writing songs, drawing landscapes, negotiating, gymnastics
Flaws: naïve, cant trust anyone besides fellow ninjas, scared of mice and is allergic to gluten, blind in her left eye
Weapon:Two SI ninjatos. Two CB throwing stars (shrukins). bow and arrow (she rarely uses this other than grappling lines
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): simple pyrokineses (small flames, such as what a lighter would emit she can do this 10 times a day and the flame gets up to 100°F It also only stays in her hand
RP Example*: the cold wind of mount Fuji batted me around as I rappelled the rope to the ground. I couldn't help but smile as I left the dojo in te midst of night. I thought back to the last thing my mentor, and adopted brother had signed. It was hope for good times....and I knew what he meant. I continued to clamber down the rocky face, as my backpack whacked agains my back. I smiled and put my blindfold on as I hit the ground. Even without eyes I could tell where I was. It wasn't hard to decide by the path of the wind and the chills of snow. I then started to walk slowly towards tokyo, barely making a sound
Notes: although blind in her left eye she is extremely talented in sword fighting that she enjoys doing it blindfolded
History: Allison was born, sometime in the late nineties to an japanese/American father and the Greek goddess Hecate. Her father was a ninja and therefore she was trained as one too. Over the years at the training dojo, she became close friends with her master and mentor, Okano. Also she learned very early she was blind in her left eye, something Okano, who was mute, would help her with. At the age of 12 her after was killed in combat against Japanese special forces and since then Allison has pushed herself to the limit of human limitations.
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Age: 15
Birthdate: October 5
Gender: female
Eyes: black/blue
Hair: brunette
Height: 5:8
Body Type: fit, skinny (picture)
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal Parent:all she knows about her mortal parent is that he was Japanese
Country of Origin: Japan
Pets: N/A
Personality:fun loving, daredevil, smart, pretty, dangerous, laughs a lot, isn't serious unless on the battle field. She always smiles an is kind and caring. She also loves to make noise and sing. She is also autistic
Clothing: When not in combat she prefers to wear blue jeans, a red tshirt, black band necklace and a white jacket. Or dark jeans, a long sleeve black tshirt and a charm necklace, with the charm being a skull.
Talents: singing, sword fighting, writing songs, drawing landscapes, negotiating, gymnastics
Flaws: naïve, cant trust anyone besides fellow ninjas, scared of mice and is allergic to gluten, blind in her left eye
Weapon:Two SI ninjatos. Two CB throwing stars (shrukins). bow and arrow (she rarely uses this other than grappling lines
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): simple pyrokineses (small flames, such as what a lighter would emit she can do this 10 times a day and the flame gets up to 100°F It also only stays in her hand
RP Example*: the cold wind of mount Fuji batted me around as I rappelled the rope to the ground. I couldn't help but smile as I left the dojo in te midst of night. I thought back to the last thing my mentor, and adopted brother had signed. It was hope for good times....and I knew what he meant. I continued to clamber down the rocky face, as my backpack whacked agains my back. I smiled and put my blindfold on as I hit the ground. Even without eyes I could tell where I was. It wasn't hard to decide by the path of the wind and the chills of snow. I then started to walk slowly towards tokyo, barely making a sound
Notes: although blind in her left eye she is extremely talented in sword fighting that she enjoys doing it blindfolded
History: Allison was born, sometime in the late nineties to an japanese/American father and the Greek goddess Hecate. Her father was a ninja and therefore she was trained as one too. Over the years at the training dojo, she became close friends with her master and mentor, Okano. Also she learned very early she was blind in her left eye, something Okano, who was mute, would help her with. At the age of 12 her after was killed in combat against Japanese special forces and since then Allison has pushed herself to the limit of human limitations.
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Last edited by Zachattac on 8/16/2012, 1:16 am; edited 3 times in total
Kristal Meth- Retired Admin
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Re: Zachattac's characters
I do not believe we would allow a blowgun like that..
For your powers, how long, what can she make fire do, how many times a day?
With your history, you may want to look over that, your obvisouly forgot to edit it from whoever/wherever you copied it from. For one thing, you said your mother died in childbirth and your father was a god, although hecate is a goddess therefore your mortal parent would have been male. Secondly you mention something about discovering your powers of the dead, which according to your powers you do not have.
For your powers, how long, what can she make fire do, how many times a day?
With your history, you may want to look over that, your obvisouly forgot to edit it from whoever/wherever you copied it from. For one thing, you said your mother died in childbirth and your father was a god, although hecate is a goddess therefore your mortal parent would have been male. Secondly you mention something about discovering your powers of the dead, which according to your powers you do not have.
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Re: Zachattac's characters
Extremely fixed
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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I suggest you edit her Notes to say "left eye," rather than "leg eye."
How many times a day can she use pyrokinesis, and for how long each time? How hot is the fire in degrees Fahrenheit?
How many times a day can she use pyrokinesis, and for how long each time? How hot is the fire in degrees Fahrenheit?
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Re: Zachattac's characters
Fixed again
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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What would be the most powerful thing she can do with the flames, unless she can only hold it in her hand?
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Fixed
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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Approved.
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Ryan son of death
(note. I would like to make Jackson leave camp to get this character)
Name: Ryan enigma Myrkur
Age: 17
Gender: male
Eyes: brown
Hair: green or blue they change
Height: 5:8
Body Type: slim, but medium built
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: thanatos
Mortal Parent: Julie Myrkur
Country of Origin: Iceland
Pets: none
Talents: reading, and writing literature, sharpshooting, drawing, hiding, skateboarding
Weapon**: a Stygian iron sword he named destruction
Flaws: antisocial, Headstrong, stubborn, Anger management issues
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can sense if someone important to him died. He can summon a total of 7 zombies every 24 hour period and the zombies will last 20 minutes each without being destroyed. The zombies will die like a human will die, I.E. a stab through the heart or chest, beheading, ext.. Shadow travel up to a total of two miles a day twice a day. If you are bit by the zombie it will not turn you into a zombie
Life Before CHB*: His life before camp half blood wast easy, well no ones life is easy. He was born on may 6 in Iceland, his father Thanatos had left his mother weeks before. After his birth his mother strived to raise him as normal, but she died when he was 8 and he stowed away on a cruise ship to new Boston where he began to travel around and revel against anything and everyone. Then at age 16 he went to new York and soon found himself at camp half blood where he usually remained in the forest.
RP Example*: Ryan walked down the path in the woods, towards the giant rock which the other campers called Zues fist. The wind was light as it ruffled his hair, and he paid no attention to the sounds around him, he was busy listening to some song, classic rock but he had no clue who the artist was, nor did he care right now. Finally he stumbled upon a small cave and decided to go in it, not caring if someone found him.
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Name: Ryan enigma Myrkur
Age: 17
Gender: male
Eyes: brown
Hair: green or blue they change
Height: 5:8
Body Type: slim, but medium built
Skin Color: pale
God Parent: thanatos
Mortal Parent: Julie Myrkur
Country of Origin: Iceland
Pets: none
Talents: reading, and writing literature, sharpshooting, drawing, hiding, skateboarding
Weapon**: a Stygian iron sword he named destruction
Flaws: antisocial, Headstrong, stubborn, Anger management issues
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can sense if someone important to him died. He can summon a total of 7 zombies every 24 hour period and the zombies will last 20 minutes each without being destroyed. The zombies will die like a human will die, I.E. a stab through the heart or chest, beheading, ext.. Shadow travel up to a total of two miles a day twice a day. If you are bit by the zombie it will not turn you into a zombie
Life Before CHB*: His life before camp half blood wast easy, well no ones life is easy. He was born on may 6 in Iceland, his father Thanatos had left his mother weeks before. After his birth his mother strived to raise him as normal, but she died when he was 8 and he stowed away on a cruise ship to new Boston where he began to travel around and revel against anything and everyone. Then at age 16 he went to new York and soon found himself at camp half blood where he usually remained in the forest.
RP Example*: Ryan walked down the path in the woods, towards the giant rock which the other campers called Zues fist. The wind was light as it ruffled his hair, and he paid no attention to the sounds around him, he was busy listening to some song, classic rock but he had no clue who the artist was, nor did he care right now. Finally he stumbled upon a small cave and decided to go in it, not caring if someone found him.
Last edited by Zachattac on 11/12/2012, 12:36 pm; edited 7 times in total
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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Re: Zachattac's characters
Do his zombies repair themselves if they're damaged? If so, how many times can they do this?
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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How long do the zombies last, if they're not getting destroyed?
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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30 minutes is stretching it for the nighttime; at most, we'd allow 15 minutes, probably less since there's five a summon.
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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Re: Zachattac's characters
If you want to make Jackson leave camp, that's fine; just remove him from your siggy.
How many times a day total would he be able to shadow-travel? Also, telling whether somebody's wounds are fatal or not isn't a power; it's common sense. Also, I suggest you reduce the number of night zombies by one or two.
How many times a day total would he be able to shadow-travel? Also, telling whether somebody's wounds are fatal or not isn't a power; it's common sense. Also, I suggest you reduce the number of night zombies by one or two.
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Jordan- Experienced Member
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As for the zombies. Are they the kind of zombies that, if they bite you, you turn into a zombie?
By "destroying the zombie", I'm assuming you mean destroy the brain or remove the head, is that accurate?
Plus. It might just be me, but I feel like being allergic to cats isn't that big of a flaw. I'm allergic to cats, and it's not a major flaw of mine. I'd replace that with another.
By "destroying the zombie", I'm assuming you mean destroy the brain or remove the head, is that accurate?
Plus. It might just be me, but I feel like being allergic to cats isn't that big of a flaw. I'm allergic to cats, and it's not a major flaw of mine. I'd replace that with another.
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Jordan- Experienced Member
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Jordan wrote:As for the zombies. Are they the kind of zombies that, if they bite you, you turn into a zombie?
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