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Name: Lindia Inetia
Age: 17
Gender: female
Eyes: dark blue (black when under effects of curse)
Hair:  dirty blonde
Height: about 5'8
Body Type: see picture
Skin Color: tan
Roman God Parent: trivia
Mortal Parent: Ryansan Inetia
Country of Origin: Detroit, Michigan, America
Talents: knife throwing
Hobbies: reading, being alone, smoking, staying in dark enclosed places, writing dark stories, drinking herbal tea, listening to depressing music usually
Weapon**:A bracelet that turns into a crossbow with a bladed edge, made out of imperial gold. Also a Gladius that's blade is imperial gold, and turns into a keychain which she keeps on her belt.
Flaws: Curse: Lindia has a curse of darkness. Whenever she overextends her self and/or gets heavily wounded she falls into a coma in which her eyes become pitch black and she starts muttering strange things. These comas also happen if her emotions are at extreme opposites, and the comas last anywhere from 10-45 minutes apiece. However she can only experience one coma a day.
Flaws: anti social, allergic to chickens, insane, afraid of heights, scared of the sea and ocean, addicted to smoking, depressed
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She can use simple pyrokineses (such as simple blasts of flame, or starting a fire) for a total of  10 minutes, three times a day. The flames can get up to 1 foot high and can reach a tempature of 300° 

Her last power is magic, of course, but she can only use magic for a total of 15 minutes a day. She cant do difficult spells, or possess people. 
Levitation: she can lift any object that weighs up to 200 pounds twice a day. She could lift a person but she doesn't exactly know howl
Concussion bursts: She can use Up to 13 concussion bursts a day. She can throw them around 25 feet, and they will disperse like shrapnel when hit against something. They can be blocked by shields, sword blades and such or other powers. If they hit you you will be blasted back or receive scrapes and cuts. It would blast you back maybe 2 feet. The shrapnel could only go in someone maybe 1/8 inch and goes in all directions.
Over extant of any of these results in her curse.

Life Before CJ*: History: Lindia was born in the slums of Detroit, an I mean the slums. Her family was poor from the start and they did anything to survive. However her birth greatly angered her father because he wanted a son, and he was insane and drunk anyway. She has been abused and beaten by her father and step-mother since trivia left her father.. She received a nasty scar on her lower back from her father, when he used a knife against her after she disobeyed him. Lindia tried to tell the authority's, but since she was a homeless child in their minds, they wouldn't help and she continued to be beaten and abused. At age 8 Lindia ran away and broke into a magic shop, and I mean the real thing. Inside she met a strange women who after learning about Lindia's past told her about her magic abilities and for a few days told her the basics. However the police eventually found her and hauled her back to her father, where she was abused and beaten mercilessly for a solid week. She then became shy And flinched whenever a hand was stuck out to her. She remained the obedient and 'good' daughter that her father wanted her to be for about three months, up to the age of twelve. Then on her birthday her step-mother greatly beat her without warning and Lindia summoned magic and killed her stepmother, enraging her dad. She was severely punished until she ran away, 6 months later. The now 12 1/2 Lindia ran to the magic shop, to find it abandoned and boarded up. She went inside anyway ad live there for years. While in that stage of her life she started smoking and found a job as a dancer, which she hated. Eventually when she turned 16 she escaped Detroit and swore never to go back. She made her way to San Fran where she eventually found her way to camp.

RP Example*: I moaned as I rolled out of bed. I looked at my clock to see it said 6:38am. I moaned and sat up, looking around the small room I lived in. I went and showered, then put on khaki shorts and a red tshirt, my basic uniform for the volunteer center. I attached my name tag that said 'Lindia' then in smaller letters 'beware I can kill' that I had written there myself. I went and did my hair, a ponytail as I was required to have it in by the volunteer center's rules. I smiled and walked out of my room, into the kitchen area in our apartment. I smiled as I saw my adopted brother, khoni attempting to cook eggs. I saw smoke rising from the pan and walked over to him.
"you need help?" I asked him and he nodded. I cleaned and rinsed the pan, then started cooking a new set of eggs. "where's mom?" I asked as I served the two of us and sat down.

"she's at work" he replied and we ate. I smiled and finished eating. 
Any notes about your characters: Notes: her favorite book and play is Macbeth. Her favorite song is 'castle on a cloud' which she listens to when she's sad

So she could use her powers for an unrelenting three hours? That might need toned down, or break it into intervals.
What other spells does she have? You need to specify.

And her Life before CHB doesn't work. Under the law, anyone under 16 cannot work in food service.

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We wouldn't allow that sword. It would need to be entirely Imperial Gold.

Levitation. What is the biggest object she can make levitate? How long can she do this? How high can the object float?

Dark magic. She just throws balls of energy at people? Do they [the blasts] disperse, so how far can the be thrown? Can they be blocked? What kind of damage could they do?

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I would lower the amount of feet she can make objects levitate.
So could she make a person levitate?
Four hours is also too much. I would drop it to fifteen minutes.

Concussion Blasts: 50 a day is too much. I'd drop it to maybe 12.
50 yards is also a bit of a stretch. I'd bring in the range more.
How far back can the person be pushed if hit by a blast?

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You're going to need to change her RP example.
She's under 21. She wouldn't be allowed in a Casino, let alone, be allowed to work there.

From the "shrapnel" from her concussion blasts, how deep would the cuts be?
Would the blasts travel in the direction they're sent?

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If the shrapnel goes in all directions, could she be hit by her own magic?

Yes

Okay.
So her curse. Does it just make her go into a coma for a few minutes? Was she born with the curse?
Can it affect anyone else?

It can make her go into a coma for up to 45 minutes, she was born with it and it only affects her

Approved.
She is assigned to the First Cohort.