Zachattac's characters

 Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:

Name: Zachary lee
Age:16
Gender:male
Eyes:gray
Hair:black
Height:6:2
Body Type:mid build
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Athena 
Mortal Parent:George lee
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:a dog and a horse
Talents:excellent strategist and tactician
Weapon**:Cutlass, knife, and shied that's a ring
Flaws:fear of heights, people learning his plans, being underestimated
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB: Before camp half blood Zachary lived in Virginia right down the street from Washington and lee.  He flunked every subject in school except for civil war history, where he learned about his relative Robert E Lee. A fencing and chess champ six years in a row he strived to find a place in the world for him. He always had friends but not many where boys.  He was a real gentleman and helped anyone in need he saw.
RP Example*: "there he is kill him!" the empousai screamed. I quickly hurried and hot behind a tree observing my surrounding, and drew my shield and cutlass.  "we will find you and eat you half blood!". Breathing heavily I turn quickly to find myself staring at three sets of fangs. Rushing backwards I trip and see them coming quickly, is this the end?
Any notes about your characters:
strong confident and headstrong, a gentlemen, and a marksman

add 2 more flaws. That power is not allowed.
Life Before CHB and RP example needs to be 5 sentences

 Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:

Name: Alexander (al) Ross 
Age:14
Gender:male
Eyes:green
Hair:brown
Height:5:11
Body Type:mid build
Skin Color:white/tan
God Parent:ares
Mortal Parent:Gabriel Ross 
Country of Origin:Scotland 
Pets:wheaten terrier
Talents:
Weapon**:claymore type sword made of CB
Flaws:thinking I can destroy everyone of my enemy's , pushing myself to hard, minor anger management, hights
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB:lived in Scotland and was a sword fighting champ 3 years in a row.  Also I have ADHD, and used to live in kilravock castle in northwestern Scotland. I prefer to play bagpipes to annoy my enemy's before I stab them. Also I enjoyed watching my family's livestock and studying the forests. And lately I had to move to America in hope of finding my true father
RP Example*: After i left ellis island i began to explore this new city of new York. Soon I realized someone or something was following on the ferry from Ellis island to manhattan, when suddenly a tekehine jumped out in front of me with claws extended then I reach in my pocket and pulled out my pocketknife flipped the blade where it then grew into an evenly balanced claymore sword. Then after dashing to the higher deck I sliced off the tekehines head and turned around to see three more. Then knowing I was out of options I jumped to the nearest boat, a docked aircraft carrier, the intriped.
Any notes about your characters:loves playing bagpipes and eating pizza

You do realize you can take out comments on what you say you need to improve and edit your OTHER characters form to get it accepted, right?
anyways,
Is clarymore a type of sword? Is it made out of CB?
Add another 2 flaws.
Add another 2 sentneces to Life Before CHB
Add another 3 sentences to RP example

Ok I changed my character and added stuff


Thanks for the advice

Zachattac

So... the third flaw would be like... anger management issues?

Somewhat I added another and altered that flaw
You seem nice


Thanks for the tips

Zachattac

Okay. Approved

Greek demigod Form:

Name:Xavier Shadan
Age:16
Gender:male
Eyes:blackest black
Hair:black
Height:5:11
Body Type:strong, medium build
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Lethe 
Mortal Parent:George Shadan
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:gray wolf named fang
Talents:reading 1000 WPM, running, tracking
Weapon**:Stygian iron Kantana and a CB throwing knife
Flaws:Having other people know a lot about him, fear of high places, becoming emotionally attached to people
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):Shadow travel (halfway around the world once a month, across the country once a week, within 35 miles three times a day) causing amnesia to weak-minded mortals and monsters
Life Before CHB*:Before camp half blood I lived in louisa county in Virginia.  My dad worked for the CIA, so I usually stayed home with my uncle and explored the forest behind my house.  Around the age of 12 I perfected throwing the Bowie knife and always carried one with me.  Also since I was ADHD I have been kicked out of a lot of schools because of that and many other reasons. I also hunted deer with my pet wolf.  I never really made friends and no one ever talked to me except for my one friend, Trina.
RP Example*:As I took the train from DC-new York I thought about earlier today. This morning my uncle had told me that because of my ADHD and "problems" he was going to send me to a special camp for teens like me, so he handed me a ticket and drove me to the train station. When  suddenly I was awakened from my flashback to hear the sound of a giant beast of some sort bash it's head though the train wall. When the smoke cleared I saw that it was a three headed hellhound, then I quickly brought out my switchblade and it turned into my Stygian iron sword and I quickly sliced the "dog" in half.  Then I noticed that the mortals where staring and calling the police, so I ran out and disappeared into the shadows hoping I wouldn't come out in china.
Any notes about your characters:mysterious, usually alone in the back of a group, quiet    

Just a question, are those flaws because he's afraid of them?

Also, shadow travel would be a power, not a talent.
Add another sentence to Life Before CHB
We do not allow chatacters to have contact with their god parent before camp, that includes having her send you a letter. So please change your RP example

Ok I fixed those things



Zachattac

invisibility and observing the invisible would also not be a talent, they would be powers, however i do not believe those powers would go along with your god parent. Talents is simply what they would be good at if they were a normal human being, such as running, dancing, painting, etc.
How far away can he shadow travel and how many times a day?
Add another sentence to life before CHB

Ok I did that

Thanks kristal


Zachattac

Thanks did that



Zachattac

Ok I fixed it and changed alot

Is your knife cb?

Yes and so is the sword

Oaky, approved

Greek/Egyptian/Norse Demigod Form:

Name:Katrina
Age:14
Gender:female
Eyes:Hazel
Hair:brown shoulder length 
Height:5:6
Body Type:lean, muscular 
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Nike
Mortal Parent:?
Country of Origin:USA 
Pets:none
Talents:Rockclimbing, adventuring, negotiating, swordfighting, knowing people's likes and dislikes though observation
Weapon**:two knives in disguise as bracelets celistial bronze
Flaws:being disappointed, fear of losing, would do anything for loved ones
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before CHB*:before CHB I lived in Richmond Virginia in an orphanage on the James river. I discovered early that I was hard to beat at most games and i took up swordfighting. I was always in the popular group and was on a debate team.  One day when I was walking along the river I met Xavier and we became the best of friends.  I was so close in getting him to kiss me when he went to new York.
RP Example*:I slowly packed my bag Xavier's words cutting into my head that were in his letter. He had written 'come quickly need help come to Delphi strawberry service ASAP'.  I finished packing and went down stairs to the lobby of the orphanage.  As I went down I was yelled and made fun at by all the other kids that I was going to a crazy camp for crazy kids like me.  Finally I took the train to new York and walked up that hill.
Any notes about your characters:energetic, nice, kind to most, sees the good in everyone, likes to be around both genders

 

Can you explain your power more? Such as how he makes himself win...

I changed that and can she use charms speak?

I don't think we'd allow charm speak for Nike kids. And define "influencing" for her powers.