Charlii's characters

Name: Charlotte Bates
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Blonde
Height: 5'5" 165cm
Body Type: Athletic
Skin Color: Slight Tan
God Parent: Nike
Mortal Parent: Leon Bates
Country of Origin: England
Pets: A Siberian Husky called Nikita
Talents: Very quick, Natural at Sports, Lucky, High Stamina
Weapon**: A Celestial Bronze Spear (which is also a charm bracelet)
Flaws: Almost never refuses a challenge, doesn't know when to quit, can be a bit stupid at times, hates losing, doesn't like being judged badly.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: Charlotte was born in England and from a young age her Dad was training her for almost every sport. As she grew up, Charlotte was in the teams for most sports, but the sports she excelled even further in were the athletic sports. When Charlotte reached the age of 13, strange things began to happen. Some people began to look at her differently, and on a few occasions she was attacked in the streets, or people tried to break into her home. Charlotte, after realising these people were always focused on her, decided to leave home so as to protect her father. Whilst running away, she was greeted by someone who she would later discover was a satyr...
RP Example*: "Get away from me you freak!" I screamed as I ran down the back streets of the small town I once called home. I turned around the corner and noticed two more people blocking the exit ahead of me. I ran towards them, placed my foot on the wall, pushed of it and jumped over the two men blocking the exit. I landed gracefully on the floor behind them, but not looking behind or waiting, I continued to run. "Just leave me alone!" I begged.
Any notes about your characters: Her name is Charlotte, but her friends call her Charli

I don't think Nike would have that as a power.

Those really wouldn't be powers of Nike either...
Also, what do you mean in your life before CHB when you say,
"but the sports she excelled even further in were the athletic sports"?

I'd liked the hair one because I found something online which said Nike's wings may have changed colour according to her mood, and I thought it sounded pretty cool so I thought I'd go for it. I also thought the jumping one would work due to Nike's ability to fly.
If you don't think those would work though, I'll just have no powers.
Oh and by athletic sports, I mean track events.

Name: Nicole Roux
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: Green
Hair: Red
Height: 5'3"
Body Type: Thin
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Aglaea (One of the Charites/Graces)
Mortal Parent: Laurence Roux
Country of Origin: France
Pets: None
Talents: Very good at the guitar, excellent singer, excellent dancer, naturally liked by people
Weapon**: A Celestial Bronze Dagger (which is also her ring)
Flaws: Doesn't like to be judged poorly, fears failure, blames herself too much.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: Nicole was born in France, but her father died when she was only a few years old. She was sent to live with her Aunt over in the countryside in Virginia. Nicole grew up there, learning to play the guitar quickly and singing. She was really popular in her local school, in the small town, but when she turned 13, more people were taking an interest in her, and they weren't the sort of people who usually did. One boy, who was new to their school, tried to tell Nicole who she really was, but Nicole regarded him as being crazy and just trying to flirt with her, but that day, when Nicole got home, she found her house had been attacked and her Aunt was dead, the person who had done was still there as well, but he didn't look human. The boy from earlier found Nicole just in time and led her to safety, from there, leading her to Camp Half-Blood.
RP Example*: "Listen, I'm sorry, but I'm not interested in those sort of things, you seem like a nice guy, but I'm not interested," I told the new boy, I didn't want to hurt him so I tried to put him down as nicely as possible. I turned away and collected my stuff before heading home. When I got home though, I found the windows to my house had been smashed and the door had been knocked down. I ran into the house and found my Aunt lying on the floor of the living room. I ran to her and knelt beside her. She was dying, I could tell, there was no help for her, I begun to cry. She stared into my eyes, and then opened her hand. In it was a ring, she held it out to me, and so I took it. Then, I heard a noise behind me. I turned around and I saw this 'thing'. I screamed and got up and ran. I ran all the way around the house and then out of the door. I continued to run and didn't stop, until I bumped into the new boy from earlier. "Run!" I screamed at him, but he just held me.
Any notes about your characters:

Can you be a little bit more specific on what she's self-conscious about?

Editted :)

Approved.

I suggest you edit out those powers too -- Nike powers are usually about boosting a person's likelihood of achieving victory or such.

Editted again - Made it simpler :P

Approved.

Name: Selena Rivera
Age:15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Blonde, wavy
Height: 5'2"
Body Type: Thin
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Rhinos (A river-god)
Mortal Parent: Carla Rivera
Country of Origin: Spain
Pets: None
Talents:Can hold her breath for a longer period of time, is a really good swimmer.
Weapon**: CB chain whip
Flaws: Really weak with electricity (a simple static shock can cause quite a bit of pain), Gets dehydrated much quicker than other people, doesn't stand up for herself much
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can control the water. (By this I mean like Water-Bending in the tv show Avatar - look that up if you don't know what I mean, please) She can manipulate the water and use it like a weapon. The most powerful thing she can do is turn into something like a large orb and use it to smash people. She can only use this for attacks 10 times a day. Big attacks like the boulder drain her much quicker though (she can only hold it for 2 minutes at most)
Life Before CHB*: Selena was born and raised in Spain, living in a small house that was alongside the river Tajo. She grew up living only with her mother, who absolutely refused to talk about her father. Selena loved to swim and would go every day, she was in the school swim team and won many competitions for the school, but she never went to do any national competitions. On her 13th birthday, a boy came to Selena's house, telling Carla that he needed to take Selena, but Carla wouldn't allow it, and wouldn't speak of it either. Every few months, someone would come saying the same thing, and still Carla wouldn't tell Selena what was going on. As the days went on though, strange things were beginning to happen to her, and she was beginning to notice things. On her 15th birthday, Carla gave Selena a belt, saying it was a gift from her dad. When Selena rubbed the buckle it turned into a whip, and when she rubbed the handle it returned. At the same time, she told Selena she needed to go with the boy who had been there 2 years ago.
RP Example*: "But Mum, how is this possible? How did this just turn from a belt to an actual whip and back?!" I put the belt on my shorts and clipped the buckle. There was a knock at the door, my mother went to open it and there was the same boy I'd seen two years ago. My mother and him began to talk quietly, so much so that I couldn't hear. When my mother returned, she was crying. She told me I needed to go with this boy today. "What? I can't just leave!" I told her, but she wouldn't listen to me, she just told me I was going to a camp. I didn't see what was wrong with that, I didn't mind that so much. She told to go and pack my bags. I ran upstairs and packed as much of my stuff as possible. Then, I left with the boy to go to this camp.
Any notes about your characters:

What's the most powerful thing she can do with the water?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chain_whip <-- Perhaps this type of whip would work to be CB?

Add another flaw; dyslexia is a standard demigod flaw.

You have to be specific with the attacks, and dyslexia is something that everyone has in the camp, so it isn't really considered a flaw.

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So she basically makes a giant orb of water and tries to smash a person with it?

Pretty much

Mhm.... I recommend you put orb, rather than boulder, then. Does this mean she solidifies the water and knocks them around with it for a couple of minutes, or does she just suspend it in the air and dumps it on them, like having water from a big bucket poured on them from above?

Editted, and it's more like she kind of solidifies the water in a sense and then knocking them around with it, a lot like being hit with a big hammer basically.

Name: Ciara Martin
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown and Long
Height: 4'9"
Body Type: Thin
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Unclaimed (It will be Pollux though)
Mortal Parent: Helen Martin
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: None
Talents: Very Skilled Horse Rider, Horses naturally like her.
Weapon**: None, all she has is a coin (which is actually a CB sword, but she doesnt realise it)
Flaws: Shy, forgetful, short-attention span (except when dealing with horses)
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can talk to horses and pegasi
Life Before CHB*: Ciara was born and raised in the country-side of Virginia. She lived with her mother and her family on their farm. Ciara quickly became attached to the horses, and was soon riding, racing and showing off on them. She spent most of her time over in the stables, either grooming or just talking to the horses. She actually regarded more horses as her friends than she did people at her school (which was quite small). Soon after her 11th birthday, Ciara's mother sent her with a strange man to a camp where she would be with other people like her and would grow and train there.
RP Example*: "That's it girl, keep going, don't be afraid," I whispered to Elise (as I had named her) as we raced down the field towards the narrow river. We galloped towards it and then leaped through the air. We soared straight over the river and landed on the other side. I cheered when we landed, and trotted back around over to the stables. I hopped off Elise and grabbed some sugar cubes, then feeding one to her, "Good girl, you did well today!"
Any notes about your characters:

Approved.

Mhm... So how long would she be able to maintain the shape of the orb?

She could only maintain its shape for a couple of minutes before she was too tired to hold it for any longer

You'll need a specific time limit to it.

editted - I put it as 2 minutes most for the big orb