Charlii's characters

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Name: Nikita Romanov
Age:16
Gender:Female
Eyes:Blue
Hair:Blonde
Height:5'6"
Body Type:Thin
Skin Color:White
God Parent:Ares
Mortal Parent:Alexis Romanov
Country of Origin:Russia
Pets:None
Talents:Skilled in Conflict, Precise with Throwing Knives, Can play the guitar.
Weapon**:A CB Short-Sword, and CB Throwing Knives (which are also the charms on her bracelet)
Flaws:Stubborn, Almost never refuses a challenge, Tends to Rush Things.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):None
Life Before CHB*: Nikita was born in Russia and lived in a large house with her mother and step-father. She was sent to a boarding school and learnt English as well as Russian. Nikita was kicked out of her first school though after a couple years, she got into too many fights. She was kicked out of the next, and the next. They were all boarding schools, and so it was put down to that she was seeking her parents attention. Still though, her parents kept sending her away, it was mainly her step-father who wanted nothing to do with her seen as how she was not his daughter, and he wanted to focus on raising a new family with her mother, this angered Nikita.
RP Example*: "I'm not going to another boarding school!" I screamed at my step-father, and then he hit me. I screamed in pain, but then jumped up and pushed him backwards. He came back towards me, so I ran forwards and rugby tackled him to the floor. Then, I sat on him and began to repeatedly hit him in the chest. "I'm not going again!" I yelled at him. Then, my mother came storming into the room. I jumped off my step-father and ran up to my room and locked the door. I sat down on the bed and began to cry.
Any notes about your characters:

Hotheaded and stubborn is practically the same thing. Pink eyes is a no unless she wears pink contacts. Can she always spot their weak spot?

Editted - and only when she focuses on it, otherwise no, she see's the opponent the same as anyone else.

So, what do you mean by a person's most vulnerable point -- like, the point where she can get in the most damage or, like, a weak spot in their positioning?

Both really, when in this mode, she can see like where their armour is weakest, or the positioning, or where she should hit to do the most damage.

Eh.... A good warrior would be able to see weak spots in positioning without a power -- as for seeing the point she can damage the most, I don't think that'd be allowable.

Would be acceptable for it to be like where the armour is weakest and just put it as that, "able to see the weakest point in the armour" ?

I don't think so, sorry.

Editted - Ok, just removed the power then

Approved.

Name: Kyla O'Shea
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Eyes: Green
Hair: Red
Height: 5'5
Body Type: lean, athletic
Skin Color: white, pale
God Parent: Tyche
Mortal Parent: Darren O'Shea
Country of Origin: Ireland
Pets: None
Talents: Very good at Games of Chace and usually come out on top.
Weapon**: A Celestial Bronze Staff and Celestial Bronze Throwing Knives.
Flaws: Doesn't know when to give up, takes too many risks, often rushes things, does things without thinking, doesn't think about the consequences, gets really annoyed when she loses.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: Kyla and Darius were born and raised in Ireland. Their father was a dunkard and often took to beating his children, especially Kyla. Many times the pair tried to leave home, but they always got brought back home by someone. Then, one day, as Darren was beating Kyla, Darius leapt in to try and help her, since he loved his sister, he begun to hit his father, and knocked him backwards. as he was staggering, Darius pushed Darren and knocked him over. As their father fell, he hit his head on the edge of a mantle-piece and died. The pair of them then took to the road, where they spent a few years before they were found and brought to Camp Half Blood.
RP Example*: "Darius!" I screamed, as Father lay on the floor. I dived forward and grabbed his head, and when I brought my hands back they were covered in blood. I turned to Darius and looked him, he just stood there frozen. "He's dead!" I screamed. I sat down on the floor and started to cry, "What are we going to do?!" I said.
Any notes about your characters: luckier than most,

Name: Darius O'Shea
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Green
Hair: Brown
Height: 5'9
Body Type: Skinny, athletic. doesn't look very muscled, but he is quite strong.
Skin Color: White, pale
God Parent: Tyche
Mortal Parent: Darren O'Shea
Country of Origin: Ireland
Pets: None
Talents: Very good at Games of Chace and usually come out on top.
Weapon**: A Celestial Bronze Rapier, and A Mini Crossbow with Celestial Bronze Bolts.
Flaws: Too protective of his twin sister, sometimes plays things too riskily, will usually attack people who say anything bad about his sister, gets really annoyed when he loses.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: Kyla and Darius were born and raised in Ireland. Their father was a dunkard and often took to beating his children, especially Kyla. Many times the pair tried to leave home, but they always got brought back home by someone. Then, one day, as Darren was beating Kyla, Darius leapt in to try and help her, since he loved his sister, he begun to hit his father, and knocked him backwards. as he was staggering, Darius pushed Darren and knocked him over. As their father fell, he hit his head on the edge of a mantle-piece and died. The pair of them then took to the road, where they spent a few years before they were found and brought to Camp Half Blood.
RP Example*: I stood there as Kyla and screamed and dived forward to father. I was shocked, I hadn't meant to do that, I just meant to keep him off Kyla, I just wanted the best for her. After Kyla told me he was dead, I wasn't sure what to do, but I knew we couldn't stay there. I joined Kyla on the floor and then said to her, "Go and clean up and pack your bags, we're leaving." It was more of an order, but I helped her with it all, and I packed my bags as well.
Any notes about your characters: Luckier than most

Being lucky isn't a talent.

I'll just move it to under any other notes then, but Children of Tyche are luckier than others, so I wasnt too sure where to put it

editted

Looks good.

Approved.