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    Nefertiti DONE READY FOR APPROVAL

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    Post by Mason 11/2/2014, 1:53 pm

    Nefertiti II Ieb Voncheses
    Daughter of Hathor

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    Name:
    Nefertiti II Ieb Voncheses. Her first name came from the Egyptian queen Nefertiti; as you can tell already, she is Egyptian, as well as all of her family. Her middle name comes from the Egyptian word meaning "heart." Her last name comes from her Italian relatives. Nefertiti was named, well, "Nefertiti" because her father thought she was a beautiful baby at birth, and Nefertiti actually means "the beautiful one has come." Her father also based that off to make her middle name; he believed that every man would fall in love with her. Also, he named her it in tribute to Hathor, who told him at birth who she was and...well, we'll get onto that part later.
    Gender:
    Female
    Mortal Parent:
    Nefertiti's mortal parent is her father, Alberto Voncheses, who is age 49. Hey hey, guess what? Nefertiti's family is also Spanish. Alberto was a director, actually, making minor movies; one day on the streets of New Jersey, he met Hathor in human form. He instantly fell in love with her, and as a way to get to know her, acted her to be the star in his next movie. She said she wasn't an experienced actress, which led Alberto to get very angry. She said, though, that she would work on the film with him. It was a Sci-Fi movie about Space Science, which is extremely convenient, because Hathor has to do with the Milky Way.

    On the first day on set, Alberto asked her out. They hung out after shooting the movie for the next eighteen months, until eventually...well, Hathor was pregnant. After the movie was done and released, she had Nefertiti. She told Alberto who she was and told him she had to leave. She left immediately, making Alberto very upset, which led him to almost giving away Nefertiti for adoption (he didn't want his emotions about Hathor getting in the way of raising a child properly), but he didn't, because he loved Nefertiti so much. And he ended up raising her in the Big Apple, New York City, New York. He became a more famous director eventually, which led to him making blockbuster movies, and him and Nefertiti moving from a cozy apartment to a huge mansion.
    God Parent:
    Hathor, the goddess of love. The story of her and Alberto is in the 'Mortal Parent' section. There is only a couple things I did not mention. One is that Hathor's mortal name was Maya Destine. Another was she was posing as a model. She had gone to New Jersey in hope of finding Alberto and his relatives, because she heard of their Egyptian heritage, and she wanted to...be involved in it. When she first met Alberto, she thought he was an annoying creep, but she eventually fell in love with him. She loved him so much it was hard to leave, almost unbearable. But she knew she couldn't stick around.
    Date of Birth:
    Nefertiti was born on July 18th, 1997. She is currently age seventeen. The day she was born on was very hot, because it was summer. It was a very beautiful day. It was 87 degrees Farenheit. It was also a very busy day in New York. She was born exactly two months after the Sci-Fi movie had come out. It was a huge summer blockbuster. Anyway, she was born at exactly 3:37 PM EST in Room 128 of some high quality hospital.
    Place of Birth:
    Nefertiti was born in a fancy hospital, room 128, in New York City, New York. It was towards the busier part of New York City.
    Hometown/Last Residence:
    Nefertiti last lived, and was born in, New York City, New York, in the huge mansion that was mentioned. The mansion is the opposite of the fancy hospital she was born in; it's on the less busier side of New York City. Of course, though, 'less busier' for NY City is equalivent to twice the business of other cities.
    Race/ethnicity:
    Nefertiti is Egyptian, US English (Caucasian), Spanish, German, Italian, and Czechoslovakian. Egyptian comes from her ancestors and mother; English and German comes from her grandparents; Spanish comes from her great-grandparents; Italian comes from her great-great-great-great grandparents; and, lastly, Czechoslovakian comes from her seven-time-great-grandparents.
    Accent:
    This is very complicated- Nefertiti's voice sounds like a soothing Egyptian-English woman with a hint of Spanish and Italian. Her other ethnicities don't come in play here.
    Skin Tone:
    Nefertiti's skin is a light tan, so she looks like a swimsuit model in a way.
    Eye Color:
    Nefertiti's eyes are a beautiful brown that made you feel very warm and comfortable in her presence. They also are deceiving; they can lead you into thinking she's thinking something she's not really thinking. Did you catch that? They stare directly at you, and what I mean by that is that they make you want to tell the truth. Her eyes might be one of the most complicated things about her; they are beautiful, warm, deceiving, and many other adjectives.
    Hair Color:
    Nefertiti's hair is a dark brown/black. It is very luxurious and gorgeous. It is very soft as well. She often wears it down, hardly ever in a ponytail, and DEFIANTLY not in pigtails. She despises pigtails; when she was younger, her father also made her wear her hair in pigtails, and she grew sick of it quick. Often, at school, she would take the pigtails out and put them back in before she arrived home. Many girls are jealous of her hair. A really expensive barber cuts her hair, hired by her father. She doesn't brush it or anything; we could get into a shampoo talk and stuff, but I think you get the point.
    Hair Length:
    Her hair goes to mid-back. She isn't a huge fan of short hair for girls, or long hair for guys, for that matter, but she thinks she looks amazing with short hair, so she's had it like that a few times.
    Height:
    Nefertiti stands at 5'6". She isn't terribly tall or terribly short. She often uses high heels to boost her up to 5'8".
    Weight:
    Ruuuuudeee. Nah, joking. She weighs exactly 116.2 pounds.
    Body Type:
    She has a slender body, but isn't like, bone-skinny.
    Appearance:
    Nefertiti is a very beautiful girl with very stunning brown eyes and black hair. Her hair is almost always down. She often wears skirts and dresses and wears very expensive clothes, from her father's money. Her favorite color, that she also thinks looks best on her, is a certain shade of red, a bit like this. Her second favorite being a sky blue color, a bit like this. She enjoys wearing very expensive sunglasses, that look a certain way: circle, but not like, Harry Potter, and a shade of brown that she likes seeing sunny days in. Her skin is a light tan. She is slender, but not like, bony, as said. She often wears high heels; she is normally 5'6", but goes up to 5'8" with them on.
    Weapon:
    Nefertiti doesn't like sparring, however though, she owns a weapon, just in case: a Celestial Bronze sword. The part where you grab is made of oak wood. It's about a foot long and two inches wide. The blade is four feet long and two inches wide. It is very sharp, especially at and around the tip. It could do some serious damage if used properly. Lucky for you, Nefertiti sucks at sparring/fighting, and hates it as well.
    Armor:
    Nefertiti, once again, has her beliefs about sparring/fighting, but just in case, she has Celestial Bronze armor that fits her perfectly. It was made by some Hephaestus kid who thought by making her armor that he'd get lucky and get a date. Yeah, no. He ended up with a serious rejection heartbreak, but she took the armor-gift anyway.
    Pet(s):
    Nefertiti used to own a rare species of hamster, which was named Jel, but it died literally right in front of her, which is why she's scared of hamsters today.
    Skills/Talents:

    • Singing
    • Dancing
    • Flirting/Getting boys
    • Designing clothes/outfits
    • Engineering
    • School (good grades, attendance record, teachers liking her, etc.)
    • Applying make up
    • Modeling
    • Acting
    • Drawing
    • Painting

    Flaws:

    • Scared of snakes
    • Scared of spiders
    • Scared of hamsters (read 'Pets')
    • Claustarophic
    • She follows the crowd, instead of following her own path
    • Perfectionist
    • A really annoying mole on her left cheek (facial flaw)

    Strengths:
    All of her talents.

    • Quick reactions
    • Strong-hearted (what people think of her doesn't bother her)

    Weaknesses:

    • Fighting/sparring
    • Dealing with pets
    • Helping people out (she doesn't do it when she knows she's supposed to)

    Likes:
    All of her talents.

    • Hanging out with friends
    • Doing thrilling things
    • Dances/proms
    • Shiny things
    • To be more specific on her boy obsession; boys that a) are cute to her, b) are friendly, lovable, etc. (not a jerk), c) do nice things for her and are reliable and d) oh, here we go with the stereotype complaining: boys who play sports and are strong.
    • Kool Aid
    • Tennis, even though she hates sweating
    • Soda
    • Being popular
    • Expensive food
    • Expensive stores
    • Expensive clothing
    • Animals
    • Talking about herself
    • Compliments
    • High heels
    • Cupcakes
    • Parties
    • Music
    • Mirrors
    • Camping
    • Scary movies
    • Action movies
    • Swimming
    • The beach
    • Movies
    • Lip gloss, or make up in general
    • Peaceful places
    • History
    • When people listen to her (not that hard, though)
    • Drama (club, shows, etc.)
    • People similiar to herself
    • Selfies
    • Skirts
    • Dresses
    • The colors red and sky blue
    • Tan skin or dark skin
    • Wearing her hair down
    • Cute nicknames
    • Polite/friendly people
    • Doing things rebellious
    • Late night things
    • Maybe...maybe some computer/video games....wait what? Who said what?
    • Maybe books too....
    • Glasses, just not nerdy ones
    • Being billingual (she knows lots of languages)
    • Jewelry

    Dislikes:

    • Pigtails
    • Rude people
    • Hard candy
    • Suck-ups
    • Goody-goodys
    • Nerdy glasses
    • Un-expensive things
    • Romantic movies
    • CHB'S Store
    • Fake tans
    • Panty-hose
    • No-hygiene-boys
    • Creeps
    • The nickname, for herself, Double Ti[/u]. Like, Ti, Titi, Nef, etc. are OKay, but like, do not call her Double Ti. No really though someone needs to start calling her this just to annoy her.

    • Boys who want to solve everything with fighting
    • Rapping
    • Bugs
    • Chicken pot pie
    • Sweating
    • Fighting/War
    • Cocky people; confident is defiantly good, cocky though, no
    • Boys who purposely try to please her just to go out with her
    • Braces; as for, like, herself. She hated them when she was younger
    • Toads and frogs
    • 'The act'
    • CHB Cabins

    Fears:

    • Hamsters
    • Spiders
    • Snakes
    • Death

    Personality:
    Nefertiti is a very kind and nice girl, although she is very rebellious and action-hungry (not violence, though). Lots of guys in camp like here, and she often flirts with them. She has this thing called 'the act,' where she pretends to be more queen-like than she really is when around other popular kids. This earned her the punny, funny nickname 'Queen Nefertiti.' Though, if her her actual true friend, she is the most awesome person in the world. She often talks about her rich-ness and wealth and such, on accident, annoying some people. She doesn't purposely gloat unless she doesn't really like you. She is also very generous. Nefertiti tries to help people, but she's really bad at it, from 'how to make toast' to 'how to to take 5! times 67pi^2.'
    Abilities/Powers:

    • She can influence people's emotions. Her limit depends on her strong the current emotion is (ex: they're like, extremely happy), and how many people she does this to per day (it becomes weaker to each person she uses it on, throughout the day. ex: Person 1's emotion change is more powerful than 2, which is more powerful than 3, etc.). She can do it five times a day for fifteen minutes. She has a forty-five minute cooldown. If she goes over the limit, she will pass out for at least three hours. She can de/increase an emotion by 40%. She can completely change an emotion, if it's on the weaker side. It can be resisted by their true emotion strongly being thought about, blocking out her.
    • She can talk to cows, lions, falcons, cobras, and hippos.
    • She can tell when people are in love.
    • She can tell when a women is pregnant (she doesn't know what to think of this).
    • She can make her reflection disappear. Not her shadow, though, or herself.
    • She can summon up to five musical instruments a day. She doesn't know what to think of this. She has a twenty-minute cooldown. She can send them back; this is not included as a usage. She has to be within a thirty-mile radius from the instrument(s).

    Social Status:
    She is a total dork with no friends. No, joking! She is an extremely popular girl, known by almost everyone in camp.
    Summer or Year Rounder:
    She kinda does whatever. She goes/stays/leaves at camp when she feels like it.
    Years at Camp:
    Nefertiti has been at camp for around four years.
    Life Before Camp:
    Nefertiti was born on July 18th, 1997 in NY City, NY. It was a very hot day. Right away, Hathor left, telling Alberto who she was. This put Alberto in the state, previously talked about. No one knew this, however. Eventually, he sucked it up, but it made Nefertiti's first year of life rather miserable. He started hiring various nannies to come in and watch Nefertiti, while he was on set filming more blockbuster movies. This is where Nefertiti started kinda getting she was royality, around age two or so. Of course, her mind didn't understand it as complexly as it does now, not nearly. When she finally went to school, she went to a very expensive private school, where she found out how many boys really liked her. As hard as it is to believe, she got the outline of her flirting act at only age six.

    When she went into secondary/middle school/junior high, she really started being royality. However, later on, she was found by school by her father, who told the secretary and such that she had an early dismissal. He took her, in his private jet, to Camp Half-Blood, after explaining everything, even that she'd be even more different than the people there, being Egyptian, not Greek. She hated Camp Half-Blood at first, but she has learned to deal with it.
    Role-playing Example:
    Nefertiti walked into the Mess Hall, looking around at all the disgusting food. She got a few of her friends and went over to NY City to some fancy lunch place, where they ate (insert fancy food here). After that, they went out shopping, then to her mansion, where they watched her father's most recent movie for free. That's right- she got early copies from her father, sent to her from her house to Camp Half-Blood. After, they had icecream, and I mean the expensive kind. It was a great time for Nefertiti, and she hoped her friends, too. She took them back to camp, where she went to her cabin and slept, not even complaining that night about how much she hated CHB cabins. That was literally a nightly routine, like brushing your teeth. Nefertiti, in the morning, got ready for three hours, then went out. She went to the music room to listen to a bit of music.
    Notes:
    FC is Phoebe Tonkin
    Also, source for powers: http://www.egyptianmyths.net/hathor.htm
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    Post by Kendall 11/4/2014, 6:17 pm

    What exactly do you mean in her flaws section about a mole "under her head"?

    Powers/Abilities:
    - How many times a day can she influence others' emotions, and how long does it last?
    - Can she make her reflection disappear for as long as she wants, or...?
    - Where do these musical instruments tend to come from?

    For her Life Before Camp, I'm not understanding the last paragraph. What do you mean she started to "really be royalty"? Why did her dad suddenly decide to take her to camp?
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    Post by Mason 11/4/2014, 6:26 pm

    Like, on her neck, upper neck.

    -It depends on what I put there. Until they realize they've kinda been possessed.
    -Yeah, because it's kinda like....a no-energy thing?
    -The music room

    She realized her father was famous and such, and raised above everyone else. She got claimed.
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    Post by Kendall 11/4/2014, 6:39 pm

    Mhm. Add a facial flaw, too.

    Powers:
    - You'll need a set limit for time and number of usages, sonny.
    - What's the farthest she can be from the music room at most in order to summon a weapon? (ie: the range/radius around her from which she can summon weapons)
    - What's her cool-down between instrument-summoning, and can she send them back?

    How did her dad know she'd been claimed?

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    Post by Mason 11/4/2014, 6:48 pm

    OKay, edited.

    -Edited.
    -She has to be in CHB.
    -20 minutes, and yes, but that doesn't count as a usage.

    He knew from Hathor, at Nefetiti's birth, to send her at thirteen. It's not like Greeks/Romans, so.

    (I will after the form's been approved, before I start RPing her.)
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    Post by Kendall 11/4/2014, 6:53 pm

    (Better PM one of the admins now, unless you mean you don't have enough drachmas now.)

    Pimples tend to go away? It's not a permanent flaw, anyway.

    Powers:
    - Cool-down for emotion-influencing?
    - How exactly does she influence emotions? You'll need to define how much she can influence them.
    - Edit in the cool-down for her instrument-summoning and how she can send them back.
    - So she can't summon any instruments when she's not in CHB? Pity.
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    Post by Mason 11/4/2014, 7:36 pm

    (OKay!)

    Edited.

    -Forty-five minutes
    -She kind of persuades them by like looking at them, and like, soothing them in a couple second trance in a way. Like, not taking them over, just they kinda feel like a warm breeze over their body.
    -Edited.
    -Unless, how's this; she can summon anywhere in NY (State), but the farther away, the more energy it takes?
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    Post by Kendall 11/5/2014, 8:30 pm

    Powers:
    - Does she have to be a certain distance away from a person in order to influence said person's emotions?
    - Edit in the cool-down time.
    - I don't think you answered my question about how much she can influence emotions?
    - She'll need a specific radius for the instrument thing. (ie: 20 miles from her)
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    Post by Mason 11/5/2014, 8:42 pm

    -Within 15 feet.
    -Edited
    -She can influence them greatly; it's limit is how strong the emotion is, how long it's been going on, etc.
    -Edited
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    Post by Kendall 11/8/2014, 7:35 pm

    Those are very vague limits for the emotion power. You'll need to get more specific.

    Otherwise I think your form looks fine.
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    Post by Mason 11/8/2014, 7:41 pm

    Edited.
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    Post by Kendall 11/8/2014, 8:18 pm

    By how much could she augment/decrease a certain emotion (ie: make them 10% less happy)? Can she completely change an emotion? How can a person resist this?
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    Post by Mason 11/8/2014, 8:50 pm

    up to 50%
    yes, if the emotion is on the weaker side
    their true emotion is strongly thought about- almost like a patronus kind of thing, blocking the other emotion out
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    Post by Kendall 11/8/2014, 9:12 pm

    Maybe lessen that percentage somewhat (down to 40 at least) and then I'll approve this.
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    Post by Mason 11/8/2014, 10:05 pm

    OKay, 40%
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    Post by Kendall 11/8/2014, 10:11 pm

    Edit that as well as how to resist into the form.
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    Post by Mason 11/8/2014, 10:16 pm

    edited
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    Post by Kendall 11/8/2014, 10:20 pm

    Approved. You will be awarded 1170 drachmas for your form.

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