Daughter of Hermes

Name: Katherine Grace Silverton
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: Golden Brown
Hair: Light Brown
Height: 4’5
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: White
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Parent: Lila Grace Silverton  
Country of Origin: ok short flashback on where Katherine was born, she was actually born and raised in USA of California San Francisco until she was five, and she arrived in New York Manhattan on December 22 2008.
Pets: N/A

Talents: She loves to sing old lullabies, and she can hear things from far away
Weapon**: One celestial bronze sword and a shield
Personality: She very kind and graceful
Flaws: she steals some important items, like last summer she took car keys from some guy who didn’t pay attention and she drove off…soon after a few hours she got pulled over and was taken home to see her mother, and she promised never to do that again. She makes mistakes in dangerous situations sometimes she would like screw up in fights with Gorgons or other monsters fights, and she messes up on friendships sometimes like last winter in USA California she broke up a relationship between her best friend Tila and her other best friend Max.
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): Master Thief
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): N/A
Life Before Camp*: Life before Camp Half- Blood was somewhat ok, she live in San Francisco California for a while, then she moved to New York Manhattan on December 22 of 2008. Her Mother was Kind and gentle to her daughter. She was low on money and the only reason is, was that they were moving around the place. First Was Oregon Salem, then it was San Francisco, now it was New York Manhattan. Katherine loved New York, until monsters like the ones in Greek mythology that her grandpa Lawrence always spoke about. It was basically Cyclops and Lower class monsters you name it, Katherine was chased by them. Her mother was so worried she listened to the advice of her husband that vanished at the time Katherine was born and that god was Hermes the god of thieves and messengers
RP Example*: “Mom?” questioned Katherine, as she was sitting in the back.”   Her mother took a turn and stopped at the forest in her car and she said “here lies a camp on what your father told me about your kind, he says you should be safe here.” Kathrine was shocked, but she didn’t question her mother. She got out of her mom’s car and headed inside the forest to search for the camp.

Erebus wouldn't be allowed as a god parent; all primordial gods are banned, and regular Titans' kids must be bought from the site store. Try another god.

Also, the year you have for her age is off: the site takes place around 2014-2015 time, so she'd have to be born in 2000-2002 to be 13 now.

Also, wolves are banned unless you won an exotic pet prize from a mystery box or contest.

As I said in your previous form, you MUST reply to your topic that you've edited so we know to check this again. We will not be checking either of your forms anymore unless you do so.

Like I said before, her age would be off judging by her birth year. A birth year isn't required -- just an age is fine. Being born in 1990 would make her around 25 now, which is beyond our age maximum.

San Francisco, CA and Manhattan aren't countries. Like, we know these are in America, but we're not necessarily asking for just the state she was born in and cities she's lived in?

How is hearing things from far away a talent? How far away can she be from something to hear it at most?

Add more to her personality; make it at least two lines long.

Flaws:
- Your last two flaws are... very general. Be more specific about them.
- How bad are her mistakes in deadly situations? Everyone makes mistakes. Can she just not handle high-stress situations at all?
- Everyone messes up their friendships sometimes. What does she do to cause this?

How good is she at thievery?

LBC:
- Why were they moving around constantly?
- How frequently was she attacked by monsters?

For your RP Example, remove the part about the wolf.