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Name: Laura Mist
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Ice Blue
Hair: Tan-Blond
Height: 5'3
Body Type: Curvy (?)
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Hope Mist
Country of Origin: USA, Ohio
Pets: No
Talents: Shes a good drawler and knows how to tell time with the sun's potion.
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze , four foot long dobble bladed swor named Blazer. /// Silver bow/arrow with Celestial Bronze tips.
Flaws: She would do ANYTHING for her friends/the people-creatures she loves. She has a bad temper and also doesn like o tske advice from others and do things her way
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She is able to use small rays of light for a peirod of ten minutes and it depeands on how powerful and large the rays are to how many times she can use hem a day (She mostly uses the Sun Rays to blind others, but they can also be used as spot light /which are kind of fun to use some of the times/ They may also be used to heat things up /But that takes power from her and weakens her for a pirod of time (Depeands on how much power she uses for how longs she is 'weak' )/), and is the most powerful at noon/evening.
Life Before CHB*: Laura was ten when she and her mother were first attacked by a monster. Luckly for them, another, more exsperinced Half-Blood helped them. But before he -The other Half-Blood- could help her and taker her to camp, she ran away, scared and afraid. The Other Half-Blood never found her. She spent three years of her life, hiding and having near death exsperances. hen, finly, when she was 13, she was found and guided to Camp Half-Blood. Now its been two years. Shes still getting used to the fact that her mother was killed when she was ten, when the other Half-Blood helped them.
RP Example*: Laura sat on a log in the Camp Half-Blood forest. She knew this forest had ons of monsters and what not, but she needed time to relax. She'd just found out her best friend, who was a horse named Galez, had just died. Galez had been her frined whenever Laura needed someone to talk too. Now, she couldnt understand him like Posiedns kids could, bu she could feel that he was lisning, and sometimes commenting with head bobs and whinnys.
Laura sighed and studyed one of her arrows, like she did a million times before. It was the same old, same old arrow head /Pure Celestial Bronze and as sharp as sharp its' self/ , same silver plated stick that holds it all together, and the brigh yellow and orange horse hair on the end of it.
Any notes about your characters:

Using a bow is not a power...
Two more flaws.
How long do the rays last, and how many times a day can she do it?

I fixed it. Is it ok now?

What can she do with the sun rays?

Fixed it.

Approved.

Name:Kait Marks

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Eyes: Navy Blue/Red outline

Hair: Blonde

Height: 5'1

Body Type: Lanky

Skin Color: Pale

God Parent: Deimos

Mortal Parent: Stef Marks

Country of Origin: UAS

Pets: A snake named Vicx

Talents: Shes good at telling ghost stories.

Weapon**: CB Dagger with a hooked end.

Flaws: She likes to be alone and in the dark and doesnt like help. Also, when she gets very bad she cant control what she says adn things slip out. Plus she gets Jelous easly.

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): If you stair into her eyes, she can make you see your worse nightmare. (It depends on how long you look into her eyes on how bad the nightmare is. A person can look away, but it take a lot of power/strangth.) Her powers only last up to 5 minutes.(Unless willed otherwise), then they start to fade away. She can only use it only four a day.

Life Before CHB*: Kait was always called the Gothic Girl in school. She normal weared black clothes and black make up -which didint halp hide her pale face- . Everybody was afriad of her. She stayed in the shadows, never joined anything, and never talked unless it was cussing a teascher out becasue they unset her. She got kicked out of many schools and sometimes was never even alowed to go to a certen school. Finly, at age 15, she got tired of it and ran away. No one tryed to stop her. Then she stumbled apon a few Hunters(The Hunters of the Goddess, not normal hunters with guns.), and they told her about Camp Half-Blood.

RP Example*: (This is from one of my other rps NOT about CH-B . Link: http://thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/dronei-racers-need-more-guys?groupUrl=roleplayretry&id=2570916%3ATopic%3A58704856&groupId=2570916%3AGroup%3A18906401&page=6#comments )
Laura walked through the small town of Dronei. She had on a pair of black skinny jeans and a blood red tank top with a picture of a cartoon bunny, stamped on the side. She could feel the light, Fall breeze fluffing up her hair, and ruffling the leave. Colors of Reds and Browns, painted the yellow, dead grass as the leaves dance around in the wind. Laura had Thaira at hwer side, his wings open to take in the cool air. The thin skin of his wings where almost completly transparnt and easly ripped, so when a single leaf hits then, Thaira quickly flaps it off, and folds his wings. He snorted, feeling stuffy and tired. He had been out, trying to fly. Even though he knew he wasnt allowd yet, not until Laura was 20, and that was in 3 years, or so. Thaira's paws sank in the soft dirt of the roads. No one had cars here, most people dont even know what a car is!



Any notes about your characters:

You can have up to five characters for free. Then, if you want a 6th, 7th, 8th, buy a character slot.

How many times a day can she use her powers, and for how long do they last? (I think you mean 'fear' for the first part, and for the second part of the power that's not allowed. Only Morpheus's kids can cause dreams.)

Alright, thank you.
Fixed it.

Do you mean people see their fears the whole day?

Yeah, it kind-of makes them afraid of almost everything.

That's wayyyyy too long.
It has to be somewhere less than an hour.
How many times a day can she do it?

Fixed.

Are the fears just an illusion? Can people resist?

And 30 minutes is too long. 5 minutes per person is what we usually do.

Yes, and people are able to resist, but her eyes kind of bring them in, if you know what I mean. They...uhm...change colors, and just make people want to look in them. I hope thats alright.
Fixed.

Approved.

Name: Aven Harper

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Eyes: Gray

Hair: Light Brown

Height: 5'2

Body Type: Normal, slitly muscler

Skin Color: peach

God Parent: UNCLAIMED

Mortal Parent: Carle Harper

Country of Origin: Us

Pets:

Talents: Writing, drawling, building, and maps(He knows what most of them mean easly)

Weapon**: CB Sword named Oro .

Flaws:
1} He doesnt know what to Shut Up! He just keeps talking, and that could be fatal in battle.
2} He gets to confedent, and is a little bit of a show off.
3} In a fight, he always thinks he's right, even when he's not.

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):

Life Before CHB*: Aven was 11 when he found out he was a Half-Blood. Hed knew when hs saw a satyr. The creature freaked him out. It kept saying "Shhh! They'll hear you you! Im here to help!" , But Aven didnt know what to do...well, he did. He quickly found a way out and ran for his life. The Satyr chased him and dragged him to camp. Aven suprisingly doesnt remember much about his past. Only the big things. He remembers the name of his father, where he lived, How he lived (His Father was in the army, so they had a pertty good amount of money) and things like that. He also remembers when he was three, his dad remairred to a new women who Aven hatted. Aven could only take so much of her untile he ran away (Age 9).

RP Example*: I slowly crept along the side of a river. My long, blone hair was tied back, but my bangs refused to stay put, and offten fell in my blue eyes. I had my silver sword shelthed, but my hand hovered over it. I was carful to be quite and watch where I stepped. I was in a war after all, noise wouldnt be the best thing to make. In the corner of my eye, I saw a shadow, and heard the swift movment of a blade. In the blink of an eye, I rolled to the left, and had just enought time to get out my sword. My opponet was another Half-Blood with black hair and brown eyes. "Cas...!" I gasp. Cas used to be my best friend, now he was trying to kill me. "What in Hades are you doing!?" I yell, kneling down on the ground, sword pointing infront of me. "Trying to kill you! Now Stop...Moving!" Cass repliyed, and thristed his sword at me. I had just enough time to block it, and stand up. "I dont want to hurt you!" I say, tears clouding my eyes. "Then this should be easy!" Cas yelled, kicking my feet from under my and slashing his blade. . . . .

Any notes about your characters: He doesnt like Camp Half-Blood very much, but doesnt complain much.

You need 3 flaws

If your character is older than 13 then they have to be claimed.

Hope its ok now.

Approved.