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Ace of Spades- Retired Staff Member <3
Number of posts : 8715
Age : 29
Registration date : 2010-06-13
Christian- Senior Member
Number of posts : 2417
Age : 24
Registration date : 2011-07-01
Name:
Christian "Chris" Richardson the 3rd. He got his name from his grandfather, 'Christian Richardson the 2nd', As his family calls him.
Gender:
Christian is Male
Race/ethnicity:
His Dad was half Mexican, one quarter Italian, and One quarter German.
Skin Tone:
His skin is slightly tan, the color of caramel.
Eye Color:
His eyes are a dark blue color.
Hair Color:
His hair is brown, with blonde highlights.
Hair Length:
His hair reaches the tops of his shoulders.
Height: He is 5'5"
Weight:
He weighs approximately 130 pounds.
Body Type:
He is fit, and very muscular.
Mortal Parent:
Jarrod Richardson
Godly Parent:
Hecate - Goddess of magic, witchcraft, necromancy and crossroads.
Place of Birth:
Christian was born in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, at Allegheny General Hospital.
Date of Birth:
Christian was born on December 21st, 1996. At the moment, he is 15, turning 16 soon.
Weapon:
He prefers a bow and arrow. The arrows have celestial bronze tips. He also occasionally uses a 2.5 ft. long Celestial bronze sword.
Armor:
Christian has no special armor, and even prefers not to wear any.
Powers:
- Christian can summon the dead. The most he can summon is 4, and they can wield a Stygion iron sword. They only take one hit to destroy. The skeletons last for 20 minutes, at most, if they are not destroyed.
- Christian can control the wind. The most powerful thing he can do is blow a 135 lb. person back 4 feet. He can use this 4 times a day, and can control the wind for 5 minutes, at most.
- Christian can bend water. The most powerful thing he can do with is is make a 5 ft. wave. He can control the water for 5 minutes, and can do this 4 times a day. The most amount of water he can control is 10 gallons.
- Christian can summon animals. The biggest thing he can summon is a bobcat. The animal attacks her enemy, but sometimes will try and attack him. The animals can't be summoned if they're 5 km. or more away from Christian. The animals last for 10 minutes, at most. He can do this power 1 time a day.
Pets: He has a 1 year old hellhound named Shadow. The hellhound is the size of a poodle at the moment. It cannot shadow travel yet.
Skills/Talents:
- He is a very intelligent boy. He had a 4.0 GPA, and was a straight A student.
- He is very fast. Use to run track, and was one of the star athletes in his school.
- He has very accurate aim with a bow and arrow. Tried out archery when he was in 4th grade, and has become good over the years.
- Christian has very good stamina. He can run miles without stopping, which is very helpful.
- Christian is very athletic. As said before, he has participated in many different sports.
Flaws:
- He is easily-irratated. In 6th grade, he got expelled from school because he got in a bad fight with an 8th grader.
- He is very competitive. He always brags whenever he wins a contest/sport.
- He is very over-confident. He believes that he can do anything, at anytime.
- Christian has an ugly scar that crosses over his left cheek.
- Christian is has a short-temper. Whenever someone angers him, he may lose his temper, and go berserk.
Strengths:
-He has very good lower-body and upper-body strength, from track and other sports.
-Christian has good reflexes. It helps him greatly in battle.
Weaknesses:
- Christian can easily be manipulated, and he would also risk his life to save someone he loved.
- Christian has pretty low-self esteem.
- Another one of Christian's weaknesses the back of his head. He calls it his 'Achilles Heel."
Fears:
-Arachnophobia- The fear of spiders.
-Ophidiophobia- The fear of snakes.
-Pyrophobia- The fear of fire
-Coulrophobia- The fear of clowns.
Personality:
Christian has a very fun and funny personality. He is very humorous, and is also known as "Class Clown".
Accent/Dialect:
Christian has a Hispanic type accent, which he got from his dad.
Likes:
- Christian like to play sports, or any competition in general.
- Christian also likes to shoot his bow and arrow. Everyday he dedicates at least 20 minutes of his time to shoot. Over the years, he has gotten very accurate.
- Another one of his likes is technology. He is practically computer-addicted (Which is weird, considering he is very active) And also enjoys playing his X-box 360.
- Christian enjoys writing, as well as drawing. He has been drawing for 4 years, and has written a novel, titled On the Inside
- Christian likes the snow. In Pennsylvania, snow was very normal. His body has gotten used to the cold, and he enjoyed playing in the snow with his brother and sisters.
Dislikes:
- Christian dislikes animals, especially the animals in the camp. He feels as if they tease him, because they always seem to bite or growl at him whenever he is near.
- Christian also dislikes satyrs. Don't ask why, but he seems intimitated by them, and feels as if they stalk him.
- Christian also dislikes Aphrodite children. He calls them "Annoying, stuck-up snobs."
- Christian dislikes water. He almost drowned once, and the experience had scarred him. One of the only sports he does not do, is swimming.
- Christian dislikes the heat. His body is used to Pennsylvania weather, which can be very cold.
Social Status (e.g. loner, popular):
Christian is considered Popular at his school, but at camp, he has a couple of friends, making him neither popular or un-popular.
Appearance:
Christian looks somewhat like Niall Horan. He has blue eyes, and brown hair with blonde highlights. He is very fit, and has a pitcher's jaw. He has caramel skin, and usually dresses up in T-shirt's and jeans, and sometimes wears beanies.
Summer or Year Rounder:
Summer. He leaves to go to his school, which, surprisingly, he didn't get kicked out of yet.
Years at Camp:
He has been there for 2 years so far.
Life Before CHB:
Christian had a pretty rough life. At the age of 7, his step-mom and dad left him, his 9 year-old brother, and his two little sisters, both 3. They roamed the streets, paying for there food by begging. This life-style went on for 4 years. One tragic day, his brother, now 13 years old, got very sick. He didn't have the strength to do anything, not even get out of bed (Which was a pile of straw) After 4 months of suffering, his brother died. Christian took charge, having to feed himself, his sisters, and a baby dog that his sisters found (That dog turns out to be Shadow, Christian's hellhound.). One day, he stumbled upon a Orphanage home, and the owner took all of them in. She turned out to be nice for an orphanage lady; Christian's heard that they tend to be mean. She gave them food, a place to sleep, and even sent Christian to school. He enjoyed school, and did practically every sport they offered. He became a star athlete, and one of the most popular kids in school. He loved the orphanage and school more than anything. One day, a satyr found him in school, and took him to Camp-Half-Blood. He tried running away several times, to get back to his old life. After many failed escapes, he decided to stay for the summer, and go back to school the rest of the year.
Role-playing Example:
Christian stumbled over a branch, landing on his side. He groaned, and tried to get up. Pain shot up his arm, and he clamped his hand over his mouth, trying to stay as quiet as possible. He ripped part of his camp T-shirt and fashioned a sling out of it. It helped, and he stood up. He continued to run, trying to avoid any monsters, or other campers. He spotted a Camp Counselour, and his football skills kicked in. He tackled the guy, got up again, and continued to run. While running, he dropped his sword. He cursed in Greek, but didn't go back for it. In the distance, he spotted another camper, dressed in full armor, and he had a spear in his hand. Christian jabbed the guy in the ribs, then kicked him in the face. He then twisted his arm behind his back, then hit him in the head with a rock. He grabbed the breast plate, helmet and spear. He continued to run, hiding in bushes and trees. After a couple more minutes of this, he made it to the entrance. He continued to run, hoping he would never have to go back.
Notes:
At the moment, his arm is broken, and he has to wear a cast. If not treated carefully, they might amputate it.
Christian "Chris" Richardson the 3rd. He got his name from his grandfather, 'Christian Richardson the 2nd', As his family calls him.
Gender:
Christian is Male
Race/ethnicity:
His Dad was half Mexican, one quarter Italian, and One quarter German.
Skin Tone:
His skin is slightly tan, the color of caramel.
Eye Color:
His eyes are a dark blue color.
Hair Color:
His hair is brown, with blonde highlights.
Hair Length:
His hair reaches the tops of his shoulders.
Height: He is 5'5"
Weight:
He weighs approximately 130 pounds.
Body Type:
He is fit, and very muscular.
Mortal Parent:
Jarrod Richardson
Godly Parent:
Hecate - Goddess of magic, witchcraft, necromancy and crossroads.
Place of Birth:
Christian was born in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, at Allegheny General Hospital.
Date of Birth:
Christian was born on December 21st, 1996. At the moment, he is 15, turning 16 soon.
Weapon:
He prefers a bow and arrow. The arrows have celestial bronze tips. He also occasionally uses a 2.5 ft. long Celestial bronze sword.
Armor:
Christian has no special armor, and even prefers not to wear any.
Powers:
- Christian can summon the dead. The most he can summon is 4, and they can wield a Stygion iron sword. They only take one hit to destroy. The skeletons last for 20 minutes, at most, if they are not destroyed.
- Christian can control the wind. The most powerful thing he can do is blow a 135 lb. person back 4 feet. He can use this 4 times a day, and can control the wind for 5 minutes, at most.
- Christian can bend water. The most powerful thing he can do with is is make a 5 ft. wave. He can control the water for 5 minutes, and can do this 4 times a day. The most amount of water he can control is 10 gallons.
- Christian can summon animals. The biggest thing he can summon is a bobcat. The animal attacks her enemy, but sometimes will try and attack him. The animals can't be summoned if they're 5 km. or more away from Christian. The animals last for 10 minutes, at most. He can do this power 1 time a day.
Pets: He has a 1 year old hellhound named Shadow. The hellhound is the size of a poodle at the moment. It cannot shadow travel yet.
Skills/Talents:
- He is a very intelligent boy. He had a 4.0 GPA, and was a straight A student.
- He is very fast. Use to run track, and was one of the star athletes in his school.
- He has very accurate aim with a bow and arrow. Tried out archery when he was in 4th grade, and has become good over the years.
- Christian has very good stamina. He can run miles without stopping, which is very helpful.
- Christian is very athletic. As said before, he has participated in many different sports.
Flaws:
- He is easily-irratated. In 6th grade, he got expelled from school because he got in a bad fight with an 8th grader.
- He is very competitive. He always brags whenever he wins a contest/sport.
- He is very over-confident. He believes that he can do anything, at anytime.
- Christian has an ugly scar that crosses over his left cheek.
- Christian is has a short-temper. Whenever someone angers him, he may lose his temper, and go berserk.
Strengths:
-He has very good lower-body and upper-body strength, from track and other sports.
-Christian has good reflexes. It helps him greatly in battle.
Weaknesses:
- Christian can easily be manipulated, and he would also risk his life to save someone he loved.
- Christian has pretty low-self esteem.
- Another one of Christian's weaknesses the back of his head. He calls it his 'Achilles Heel."
Fears:
-Arachnophobia- The fear of spiders.
-Ophidiophobia- The fear of snakes.
-Pyrophobia- The fear of fire
-Coulrophobia- The fear of clowns.
Personality:
Christian has a very fun and funny personality. He is very humorous, and is also known as "Class Clown".
Accent/Dialect:
Christian has a Hispanic type accent, which he got from his dad.
Likes:
- Christian like to play sports, or any competition in general.
- Christian also likes to shoot his bow and arrow. Everyday he dedicates at least 20 minutes of his time to shoot. Over the years, he has gotten very accurate.
- Another one of his likes is technology. He is practically computer-addicted (Which is weird, considering he is very active) And also enjoys playing his X-box 360.
- Christian enjoys writing, as well as drawing. He has been drawing for 4 years, and has written a novel, titled On the Inside
- Christian likes the snow. In Pennsylvania, snow was very normal. His body has gotten used to the cold, and he enjoyed playing in the snow with his brother and sisters.
Dislikes:
- Christian dislikes animals, especially the animals in the camp. He feels as if they tease him, because they always seem to bite or growl at him whenever he is near.
- Christian also dislikes satyrs. Don't ask why, but he seems intimitated by them, and feels as if they stalk him.
- Christian also dislikes Aphrodite children. He calls them "Annoying, stuck-up snobs."
- Christian dislikes water. He almost drowned once, and the experience had scarred him. One of the only sports he does not do, is swimming.
- Christian dislikes the heat. His body is used to Pennsylvania weather, which can be very cold.
Social Status (e.g. loner, popular):
Christian is considered Popular at his school, but at camp, he has a couple of friends, making him neither popular or un-popular.
Appearance:
Christian looks somewhat like Niall Horan. He has blue eyes, and brown hair with blonde highlights. He is very fit, and has a pitcher's jaw. He has caramel skin, and usually dresses up in T-shirt's and jeans, and sometimes wears beanies.
Summer or Year Rounder:
Summer. He leaves to go to his school, which, surprisingly, he didn't get kicked out of yet.
Years at Camp:
He has been there for 2 years so far.
Life Before CHB:
Christian had a pretty rough life. At the age of 7, his step-mom and dad left him, his 9 year-old brother, and his two little sisters, both 3. They roamed the streets, paying for there food by begging. This life-style went on for 4 years. One tragic day, his brother, now 13 years old, got very sick. He didn't have the strength to do anything, not even get out of bed (Which was a pile of straw) After 4 months of suffering, his brother died. Christian took charge, having to feed himself, his sisters, and a baby dog that his sisters found (That dog turns out to be Shadow, Christian's hellhound.). One day, he stumbled upon a Orphanage home, and the owner took all of them in. She turned out to be nice for an orphanage lady; Christian's heard that they tend to be mean. She gave them food, a place to sleep, and even sent Christian to school. He enjoyed school, and did practically every sport they offered. He became a star athlete, and one of the most popular kids in school. He loved the orphanage and school more than anything. One day, a satyr found him in school, and took him to Camp-Half-Blood. He tried running away several times, to get back to his old life. After many failed escapes, he decided to stay for the summer, and go back to school the rest of the year.
Role-playing Example:
Christian stumbled over a branch, landing on his side. He groaned, and tried to get up. Pain shot up his arm, and he clamped his hand over his mouth, trying to stay as quiet as possible. He ripped part of his camp T-shirt and fashioned a sling out of it. It helped, and he stood up. He continued to run, trying to avoid any monsters, or other campers. He spotted a Camp Counselour, and his football skills kicked in. He tackled the guy, got up again, and continued to run. While running, he dropped his sword. He cursed in Greek, but didn't go back for it. In the distance, he spotted another camper, dressed in full armor, and he had a spear in his hand. Christian jabbed the guy in the ribs, then kicked him in the face. He then twisted his arm behind his back, then hit him in the head with a rock. He grabbed the breast plate, helmet and spear. He continued to run, hiding in bushes and trees. After a couple more minutes of this, he made it to the entrance. He continued to run, hoping he would never have to go back.
Notes:
At the moment, his arm is broken, and he has to wear a cast. If not treated carefully, they might amputate it.
Last edited by Pikachu on 1/10/2013, 5:03 pm; edited 15 times in total
Jordan- Experienced Member
Number of posts : 5142
Age : 29
Registration date : 2008-09-13
- Christian can summon the dead. The most he can summon is 4, and they can wield a Stygion iron sword. They only take one hit to destroy.
How long do the skeletons last if they are not destroyed?
- Christian can control the wind. The most powerful thing he can do is blow a 5'0" person back 4 feet.
Height would have nothing do do with force, it would be weight. How much would a person weigh in order to push them back?
How long can he control the air? How many times a day?
- Christian can make his hair and eye color any color he wants.
How many times a day can he do this? How long does the effect last?
- Christian can bend water. The most powerful thing he can do with is is make a 5 ft. wave.
How long can he control water? How many times a day?
How many gallons could he control at a time?
- Christian can summon animals. The biggest thing he can summon is a black bear. The animal attacks her enemy, but sometimes will try and attack him.
Where is the animal summoned from? Black bears don't live everywhere, would it be animals who live in said area? From how far away could they be summoned?
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He needs one physical flaw.
You put two weaknesses under "strengths"
Why does he have a British accent? He didn't even grow up in England. Fix that.
A broken arm wouldn't need to be amputated. A broken bone is a simple fix, especially with some nectar and ambrosia.
You need more description under "Appearance", this is a descriptive form, a one liner under something that requires more detail won't cut it, and saying he looks like a certain person is a no-no. Fix that.
How long do the skeletons last if they are not destroyed?
- Christian can control the wind. The most powerful thing he can do is blow a 5'0" person back 4 feet.
Height would have nothing do do with force, it would be weight. How much would a person weigh in order to push them back?
How long can he control the air? How many times a day?
- Christian can make his hair and eye color any color he wants.
How many times a day can he do this? How long does the effect last?
- Christian can bend water. The most powerful thing he can do with is is make a 5 ft. wave.
How long can he control water? How many times a day?
How many gallons could he control at a time?
- Christian can summon animals. The biggest thing he can summon is a black bear. The animal attacks her enemy, but sometimes will try and attack him.
Where is the animal summoned from? Black bears don't live everywhere, would it be animals who live in said area? From how far away could they be summoned?
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He needs one physical flaw.
You put two weaknesses under "strengths"
Why does he have a British accent? He didn't even grow up in England. Fix that.
A broken arm wouldn't need to be amputated. A broken bone is a simple fix, especially with some nectar and ambrosia.
You need more description under "Appearance", this is a descriptive form, a one liner under something that requires more detail won't cut it, and saying he looks like a certain person is a no-no. Fix that.
Christian- Senior Member
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Edited.
Jordan- Experienced Member
Number of posts : 5142
Age : 29
Registration date : 2008-09-13
Again with the wounds. It's not a weakness, wounds heal on their own and can be healed quickly with nectar.
Christian- Senior Member
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Age : 24
Registration date : 2011-07-01
Edited.
Jordan- Experienced Member
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I'm going to ask you to remove one of the powers. I feel like 5 powers is pushing it a bit.
Christian- Senior Member
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Edited.
Chuck- Pokemon
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I'm going to say no to summoning black bears. Try a smaller limit, or something non-living.
Where is your physical flaw?
The RP example is not long enough. It needs to be 10 complete sentences.
Where is your physical flaw?
The RP example is not long enough. It needs to be 10 complete sentences.
Christian- Senior Member
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Age : 24
Registration date : 2011-07-01
Edited. :D
Chuck- Pokemon
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How many times a day can he summon animals and how long do they last?
Christian- Senior Member
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Edited.
Chuck- Pokemon
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3 bobcats a day still seems like a bit much to me, especially with his other powers.
Christian- Senior Member
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Is 2 times alright? Or should I go to 1?
DavidPierce
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Awesome! Born in Pittsburg, PA, huh. My Charrie was born in Wilkes-Barre, PA! LOL.
Christian- Senior Member
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I went down to one.
Edited.
And, David, when my charrie's approved, we can RP, if you'd like.
Edited.
And, David, when my charrie's approved, we can RP, if you'd like.
Chuck- Pokemon
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The animals just appear, and then after 10 minutes they just disappear, correct?
Also, I assume you mean he can do this one time a day, yes?
Also, I assume you mean he can do this one time a day, yes?
Christian- Senior Member
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Yes to both.
Chuck- Pokemon
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Approved. You have been awarded 500 drachmas.
Christian- Senior Member
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Okay, so one of my characters is practically dead, Jordan just needs to finish him off. So, tell me if he needs to be completely dead for me to do this please.
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Rihanna Alyssa McDonald
Rihanna got her name from her mother, who died while giving birth to her. Her middle name was given to her by her aunt, who just enjoyed the name 'Alyssa'.
Age:
Rihanna is 17 years old at the moment
Gender:
Rihanna is definitely a female.
Eyes:
Rihanna has light green eyes.
Hair:
Rihanna had a type of lung cancer, so when she went through chemotherapy, she lost most of her hair. It is cut really short, but looks good on her.
Height:
Rihanna is about 5'8"
Body Type:
Rihanna is very muscular, from her days of training.
Skin Color:
Rihanna has a caramel colored skin.
God Parent:
Rihanna's father is Hermes. Hermes is a god of transitions and boundaries. He was quick and cunning, and moved freely between the worlds of the mortal and divine, as emissary and messenger of the gods, intercessor between mortals and the divine, and conductor of souls into the afterlife.
Mortal Parent:
Rihanna's mortal parent was also named Rihanna. Her full name was Rihanna Adele McDonald.
Country of Origin:
Rihanna was born in the United States, but was raised in New England.
Pets:
Rihanna has no pet.
Talents:
Rihanna is a very skilled fighter, is very determined, and is a skilled musician and singer.
Weapon**:
Rihanna uses any type of weapon she can find, but prefers her trusty celestial bronze throwing knives.
Flaws:
Rihanna is easily irritated, can be ignorant, and can be tired out very easily.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Rihanna can raise her speed by 10 miles per hour. She can only raise it 3 times a day, and it lasts for about 5 minutes.
Life Before CHB*:
Rihanna was born in Chicago, Illinois. She was raised by her aunt, who treated her like Rihanna was her own daughter. When Rihanna turned 2 years old, her aunt decided that she wanted to live closer to their family. They moved to New England, and lived with their grandma and grandpa. Rihanna had a happy and normal life (surprisingly). When she turned about 12 years old, her aunt sent her to New York. She arrived at Camp-Half-Blood, eager to learn more about who she was.
RP Example*:
Rihanna walked down the hill that led out to the open camp. She smiled as she saw all of the mystical creatures she learned about in the Greek Mythology lesson they had in 4th grade English. She beamed at every person she spotted, waving at satyrs and centaurs. Her green backpack was hanging over her left shoulder, a cap covering her bald head. She seemed to be a bit embarrassed by it, pulling the cap really tightly against her head. She was confident though, eager to make new friends. She stopped at the Hermes cabin, looking at everyone inside. Her insides melted, as all of these people were her brothers and sisters. She gulped, and stepped inside.
Any notes about your characters:
None
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Rihanna Alyssa McDonald
Rihanna got her name from her mother, who died while giving birth to her. Her middle name was given to her by her aunt, who just enjoyed the name 'Alyssa'.
Age:
Rihanna is 17 years old at the moment
Gender:
Rihanna is definitely a female.
Eyes:
Rihanna has light green eyes.
Hair:
Rihanna had a type of lung cancer, so when she went through chemotherapy, she lost most of her hair. It is cut really short, but looks good on her.
Height:
Rihanna is about 5'8"
Body Type:
Rihanna is very muscular, from her days of training.
Skin Color:
Rihanna has a caramel colored skin.
God Parent:
Rihanna's father is Hermes. Hermes is a god of transitions and boundaries. He was quick and cunning, and moved freely between the worlds of the mortal and divine, as emissary and messenger of the gods, intercessor between mortals and the divine, and conductor of souls into the afterlife.
Mortal Parent:
Rihanna's mortal parent was also named Rihanna. Her full name was Rihanna Adele McDonald.
Country of Origin:
Rihanna was born in the United States, but was raised in New England.
Pets:
Rihanna has no pet.
Talents:
Rihanna is a very skilled fighter, is very determined, and is a skilled musician and singer.
Weapon**:
Rihanna uses any type of weapon she can find, but prefers her trusty celestial bronze throwing knives.
Flaws:
Rihanna is easily irritated, can be ignorant, and can be tired out very easily.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):
Rihanna can raise her speed by 10 miles per hour. She can only raise it 3 times a day, and it lasts for about 5 minutes.
Life Before CHB*:
Rihanna was born in Chicago, Illinois. She was raised by her aunt, who treated her like Rihanna was her own daughter. When Rihanna turned 2 years old, her aunt decided that she wanted to live closer to their family. They moved to New England, and lived with their grandma and grandpa. Rihanna had a happy and normal life (surprisingly). When she turned about 12 years old, her aunt sent her to New York. She arrived at Camp-Half-Blood, eager to learn more about who she was.
RP Example*:
Rihanna walked down the hill that led out to the open camp. She smiled as she saw all of the mystical creatures she learned about in the Greek Mythology lesson they had in 4th grade English. She beamed at every person she spotted, waving at satyrs and centaurs. Her green backpack was hanging over her left shoulder, a cap covering her bald head. She seemed to be a bit embarrassed by it, pulling the cap really tightly against her head. She was confident though, eager to make new friends. She stopped at the Hermes cabin, looking at everyone inside. Her insides melted, as all of these people were her brothers and sisters. She gulped, and stepped inside.
Any notes about your characters:
None
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Jordan- Experienced Member
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Well first off, don't do a centered form. I don't know what it is about this one, but it's giving me a scroll bar at the bottom of the screen. And It's kind of annoying. So change that.
Christian- Senior Member
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Edited.
Hm, I do not know why, but I took it off of center, but it still is making a scroll bar on mine as well. Sorry about that. 3:
Hm, I do not know why, but I took it off of center, but it still is making a scroll bar on mine as well. Sorry about that. 3:
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"Country of Origin:
Rihanna was born in the United States, but was raised in New England."
What exactly do you mean, because New England is in the U.S.? To make it more clear, I'd put 'Rihanna was born in the United States. She was born in Chicago, Illionois, and soon moved to New England.' or something along those lines, because at first, I thought you made a mistake and I read it 'Rihanna was born in the United States, but was raised in England.'
Rihanna was born in the United States, but was raised in New England."
What exactly do you mean, because New England is in the U.S.? To make it more clear, I'd put 'Rihanna was born in the United States. She was born in Chicago, Illionois, and soon moved to New England.' or something along those lines, because at first, I thought you made a mistake and I read it 'Rihanna was born in the United States, but was raised in England.'
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Mason, it actually made sense if you read it over a few times. It means, 'She was born in the U.S., but she was raised in New England.' It just sounded a bit awkward.
How fast is her normal speed?
How fast is her normal speed?
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I'd say her normal speed was about...... 6 mph in a full sprint. So, it raises her speed to about 16 mph, in full sprint.
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