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Peter Johnson rocks's character
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°76
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
You know what? I think I'll just simplify this. Maybe I'll knock out that power, or improvise. I think I'll make it so when I touch someone and concentrate their agility, speed, strength, and stamina are increased. This lasts for 10 minutes and I can use it 30 times a day.
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- Post n°77
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
The increase is as much as what you've told me already, right? (Skills increase to that of a soldier, etc etc?) 30 times a day may be a bit too much.
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- Post n°78
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Acually, that other power was mostly for offense this is just improving their stats in general.
20 times?
Yeah I suppose it is a little similar.
20 times?
Yeah I suppose it is a little similar.
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- Post n°79
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
By how much are the stats increased?
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°80
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Maybe I'll just take off that power altogether, its'getting complicated. Also, can my character have a Horse?
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°81
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
A horse, sure.
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°82
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Thanks! :D But could it bee a pegasus?
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°83
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Sure. I suggest you edit it, then.
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°84
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
It is as you say. I also made it so he is fast, more durable, stronger, and more agile than an average demigod.
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°85
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
By how much? There really is no "standard" for demigods....
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°86
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Example time! *crowd cheers*
1. Fast: Capable of running 10 mph
2. Durable: Can be thrown against glass with great force and survive (Thew glass would pierce a normal human (And demigods) skin like paper)
3. Strong: Capable of lifting 100 lbs
4. Agile: Can run through a crowd (ex. 100 people crammed together) with ease (If you think this one isn't good then explain me doing this in rl)
1. Fast: Capable of running 10 mph
2. Durable: Can be thrown against glass with great force and survive (Thew glass would pierce a normal human (And demigods) skin like paper)
3. Strong: Capable of lifting 100 lbs
4. Agile: Can run through a crowd (ex. 100 people crammed together) with ease (If you think this one isn't good then explain me doing this in rl)
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°87
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
So, you can't cut him as easily?
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°88
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
No, you can cut him easy enough, it's just he can absorb the blows.
Am I accepted...? Finally?
Am I accepted...? Finally?
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°89
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
So good endurance. Okay.
His weapons are Celestial bronze, yes? (I suggest you remove your dead character from your siggy, or at least put a strike through his name.)
His weapons are Celestial bronze, yes? (I suggest you remove your dead character from your siggy, or at least put a strike through his name.)
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- Post n°90
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
So.. he is accepted?
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- Post n°91
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Approved.
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- Post n°92
Matthew Skull
Name: Matthew Skull
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Eyes: Black
Hair: Brown
Height: 5 feet
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Tanned
Mother: Irene McPeal
Father: Heracles (Named after him) Skull
Legacy of: Pluto
Country of Origin: America
Talents: Mischief
Weapon**: A 3 foot long blade of Imperial Gold
Flaws: Holding Grudges, thinks of self lowly, stubborn
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Pluto Powers: Shadow-travel -- can perform 6 times a day and the furthest he can do it is over a state.. Can summon the dead(Each time I summon 5 skeletons come to my aid) 8 times a day for 8 minutes. Has the power to sense when someone has died -- Cannot sense who exactly but can sense close people Geographically and friend wise.
Life Before CJ*: I was always made fun of by the other kids at Camp Jupiter -- others were just scared of me. I never had any friends, Although I deeply admired the Praetor Percy and my siblins Nico and Hazel. They treated me fairly nicely, but I was still bullied a lot.
RP Example*: After going to the Wolf House I made it back to CJ. I walked up to the Praetors hoping for a Good Cohort. "Conquer or die!" I exclaim as I kneel before them. I shiver hopelessly, I stare into their eyes. I couldn't tell what they were thinking...
Any notes about your characters: Looks good but in an odd way. (You know, Looks handsome, yet looks kinda devious and creepy.) Admires Nico, Hazel, and Percy(Ever since he arrived at CJ).
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Eyes: Black
Hair: Brown
Height: 5 feet
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Tanned
Mother: Irene McPeal
Father: Heracles (Named after him) Skull
Legacy of: Pluto
Country of Origin: America
Talents: Mischief
Weapon**: A 3 foot long blade of Imperial Gold
Flaws: Holding Grudges, thinks of self lowly, stubborn
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Pluto Powers: Shadow-travel -- can perform 6 times a day and the furthest he can do it is over a state.. Can summon the dead(Each time I summon 5 skeletons come to my aid) 8 times a day for 8 minutes. Has the power to sense when someone has died -- Cannot sense who exactly but can sense close people Geographically and friend wise.
Life Before CJ*: I was always made fun of by the other kids at Camp Jupiter -- others were just scared of me. I never had any friends, Although I deeply admired the Praetor Percy and my siblins Nico and Hazel. They treated me fairly nicely, but I was still bullied a lot.
RP Example*: After going to the Wolf House I made it back to CJ. I walked up to the Praetors hoping for a Good Cohort. "Conquer or die!" I exclaim as I kneel before them. I shiver hopelessly, I stare into their eyes. I couldn't tell what they were thinking...
Any notes about your characters: Looks good but in an odd way. (You know, Looks handsome, yet looks kinda devious and creepy.) Admires Nico, Hazel, and Percy(Ever since he arrived at CJ).
Last edited by Peter Johnson rocks on 5/29/2012, 8:48 pm; edited 8 times in total
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°93
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°94
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Yeah I thought you might say that(Thats why I had the Pluto powers and Venus Powers). But can he still keep the "Handsomeness" that adds to his creepyness?
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°95
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Yeah.... Being handsome isn't really a trait of just one god.
I suggest you edit out the Venus stuff. How far can he shadow-travel, and how long can he keep the skeletons with him? Can they be destroyed instantly or can they rebuild themselves once or twice? 15 times a day with 10 skeletons each time plus the ability to shadow-travel 15 times a day is pretty powerful for a legacy....
And yes, you can have the power to sense when somebody's died.
I suggest you edit out the Venus stuff. How far can he shadow-travel, and how long can he keep the skeletons with him? Can they be destroyed instantly or can they rebuild themselves once or twice? 15 times a day with 10 skeletons each time plus the ability to shadow-travel 15 times a day is pretty powerful for a legacy....
And yes, you can have the power to sense when somebody's died.
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°96
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Alright. :P
I can edit it out. He can shadow travel Let's say... From CHB to... The MAIN entrance to the underworld. If thats too far then to Chicago from CHB. They cannot reform till I summon them again -- however to knock them out it depends on where you hit them, if you hit they're skull KO. However if you hit their thigh then they hop on one foot but survive and lose the leg. I don't think Matthew it TOO powerful.
Thanks.
I can edit it out. He can shadow travel Let's say... From CHB to... The MAIN entrance to the underworld. If thats too far then to Chicago from CHB. They cannot reform till I summon them again -- however to knock them out it depends on where you hit them, if you hit they're skull KO. However if you hit their thigh then they hop on one foot but survive and lose the leg. I don't think Matthew it TOO powerful.
Thanks.
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°97
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
You don't, but I do. So you're going to need to reduce the number of times for both powers and skeletons per time.
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°98
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Alright, won't be accepted if I don't :/
Kendall- Mr. Moseby
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- Post n°99
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
The Chicago to CHB distance is a bit too far; usually we let people shadow-travel one state over. Also, I don't think you answered my question about how long the skeletons stay with him.
-Chris-- Member
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- Post n°100
Re: Peter Johnson rocks's character
Oh Sorry. The skeletons stay with him till they are killed or till Matthew relieves them of duty. If you need an actual time... an hour? 1 state over is Okay I guess. :/
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