Ness99's characters

Name: Shawn Shade
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Eyes: Gray
Hair: Black
Height: 5'3"
Body Type: Slightly Muscular
Skin Color: Light Brown
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: James Shade
Country of Origin: United States of America
Pets: A Crow Named Night and a Wolf Named Shiro.
Talents: A very talented marksman. Very good with mechanics, architecture, and other things. Able to speak several different languages fluently. Great at drawing and other art. Has a bit of a green thumb. His battle strategies rarely fail. Can analyze others weaknesses with a glance.
Weapon: A Celestial Bronze Bow. A Shield with an Owl chiseled in. A Sword with a ruby in the hilt.
Flaws: A loner. Likes being by himself. Is either asleep or reading when he should be paying attention. Rude. Easily provoked. Headstrong.
Life Before CHB: Shawn was living at his home with his father in Detroit. They lived a pretty peaceful life. They weren't rich, but they got by. One day Shawn was walking down Detroit streets trying to get home before dark. Suddenly a man wearing a hoodie walked out of an alley. Living in Detroit, he was used to this. His hand went instantly to his pocket. He pulled out his father's lucky dagger. But to his surprise the man put up his hands peacefully. After talking to him he assured him he just wanted to talk. He led him along to the northern harbor. There he saw a giant cruise ship named the S.S Andromeda. He told Shawn that if he helped their cause he would help him find his place. Before he could walk up the the dock a satyr came behind him and pulled him away. He led Shawn to Camp Half Blood.
RP Example: I decided to take my anger out on the archery range. Every time I flung an arrow I hit a bulls-eye. A few people joined me but didn't get in my way. After blowing off some steam I decided to go read a book. So I headed back to the cabin
and sat down in the dark corner of my bunk and read.
Any notes about your characters: Tends to be a wise guy and a perfectionist.

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Name: Zenith Powers
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Chocolate Brown
Hair: Brownish Blond/ Long and curly.
Height: 5' 9"
Body Type: Skinny, Curvy
Skin Color: Caramel
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Parent: Alicia Powers
Country of Origin: Britain
Pets: A hellhound pup named Yami and a cat named Kuro
Talents: Hiding and sneaking.
Weapon: Dual Stygian Iron swords encrusted with jewels and an invisibility necklace
Flaws: Lacks self confidence, holds grudges, and can be too trusting.
Powers: Shadow Travel about 15 ft away, 3x a day, Can raise the undead up to 5x a day, and can speak to ghosts.
Life Before CHB: Zenith was a special child. Her mother noticed that when she was 5. Ghosts seemed to follow her around. Her mother did the best she could to raise her normal. Eventually the ghosts got worse and her mother was forced to send her to camp.
RP Example: I heard the Minotaur bellow behind me. "Damn it. It's close." I said angrily. It bellowed again. I looked forward. The tree was around 50 away. Just then the Minotaur rammed into me. I fell down and felt that I had broke a few ribs. I tapped my necklace and became invisible. The Minotaur looked confused. I carefully snuck behind it, carefully unsheathing a sword. When I was directly behind it, I quickly decapitated it and watched it's body fade away.
Any notes about your characters: She's distant to most people she first meets. She also likes to sneak up on people.

Define "fade into shadows." That's probably not going to be allowed. How many undead can she raise per time, and how long do they stay with her? Can they rebuild themselves if destroyed? If yes, how many times?

Is there a time limit to using her invisibility necklace?

She is harder to see in shadows. 4. About 8 minutes. No.

Yeah, then I suggest you take that out of her powers. Do the ghosts she talk to have to be there before she comes, or does she need to summon them?

Is there a time limit to using her invisibility necklace?

Can people see this at certain times of the day for the fade in the shadows power, or if they have good eyesight? How many times per day she can do this and how long? How many undead can she raise? How many ghosts can she speak to per day, or is it limitless? If not, how long can she speak to them?

Done. They have to already be there. Yes, around 20 minutes.

She can talk to maybe, 5 ghosts a day.

Oh sorry Kenny. But still, how many undead can she raise?

4.

So, she can only use the invisibility from her necklace for 20 minutes straight? Or total minutes per day?

And how big is her hellhound?

The second one. About 2 ft tall.

Name: Nicodemus (Prefers "Nicke".) Craft
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Eyes: They change depending on the person looking.
Hair: Long purple hair
Height: 6' 3"
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Light Brown
God Parent: Peitho
Mortal Parent: Jay Craft
Country of Origin: Southern America
Pets: A Flying Squirrel named Chip.
Talents: Singing, being charismatic, playing music, and persuading.
Weapon: Enchanted CB flute that turns into a sword named "Pillow Talk", and a CB shield.
Flaws: Slightly vain, quick to argue, not a morning person, and is slightly rude.
Powers: The ability to persuade others with his voice around 5x a day for 3 minutes. If the person doesn't hear him, listen to him, or resist intensely it will not work.
Life Before CHB: Nicke had an easy life. Down in Texas most people had to force their way to things. All he had to do was ask. He also lived in Japan for a year and learned Japanese. One day near his 17 birthday a Cyclops attacked him and his mother. He made it out alive, but his mother was killed. After hiding for a few months he heard about Camp Half-Blood and went there, fast as he could.
RP Example: I ran through the forest, jumping on the trees. I thought about the events of the past few days. I got my drivers license, had a birthday, got my mother killed by a one-eyed freak, and found out I was a demigod. Great. I saw the pine tree come into sight. Almost there! I landed on the hill in front of the tree. Finally here!
Any notes about your characters: Knows Japanese fluently.

So the flute is CB as well as the sword the turns it turns into, correct? How is his shield magical? How much energy does he drain each time he uses his power for three minutes?

Yes. It can deflect magic. About 1/8 of it.

The strength of a human soldier.

So if another charrie tries to use his powers, for example, a lightening bolt, and Nicke uses his shield, the shield will deflect this? How much magic can his shield deflect?

To an extent. Certain magic will break through. Up to 10 beginner level spells.

What kind of magic can break through?

To what extent can he persuade others? As in meaning, can he control their actions...or make them say certain things..etc.

Magic from monsters. He can only deflect demigod spells.

He can influence their decisions. And if he tries harder enough he could make them say something. It would just take more energy.