Story......I guess.....

I was suddenly woken up. I heard faint whispers all around me. "Who's there?" I said. My green eyes grew wider. I swtiched on the light next to my bed. "I have a gun!" I didn't, but I needed to get whoever it was that was in my room, out. I licked my braces. "Get out! I'll call the cops right now! Now just leave the way you came in." A book fell off my shelf. I gasped and spun my head to look. I grabbed my softball bat. "I have my cell phone ya know!" I say. "I WILL call the cops if you don't get out!" The light behind me was swtiched off. My mind raced. What if I get killed!? I keep thinking to myself. I get out of bed. I put on my slippers. "When I find you," I say, "You dead!" I start to get angery. "I hope for your sake that you leave right awa-" A hand was put over my mouth. A sack was thrusted over my head. I kicked and screamed. "LET ME OUT!" I tried to scream, but my voice was so muffled, all it sounded like was "Lep meg boump!" I was thrown into the back of a truck. "YOUR BEING SO LAME WITH THIS KINDNAPPING! WHERE'D YOU GET YOUR IDEA, A MOVIE!?" I scream. The back of the truck shuts. The truck doesn't drive away. Huh? I hear people yelling at each other in the front of the truck. The back of the truck is opened. A guy takes the sack off my head. His blond hair is long and shiny. His green eyes look like mine. "Your driving, kid." He says.

"ARE YOU CRAZY?" I say. "I'm fricken 14!" The guy points a at gun at me. "Your driving." he says again. I bite my lip. I give him my hand. He carries me to the front seat. He throws me into the drivers seat. I'd never driven before, much less driven a TRUCK. And quite frankly, I was horrifed. I think of my mom who died in a car accident. I was always terrified of cars after that. I put the key that the guy gave me into the slot. The truck engine rumbled. I break a sweat. "Here goes somthing." I push down on the peddle.

Like, make it longer

It's only the first chaptar. I KNOW IT'S REALLY SHORT, but I don't care.

So anyway. Second Chapter......I guess...........

wow thats realy good do some more :) :) :) :) :)

AWESOME!!!


but you should do a spell check kitty...its for the sake of professionalisemesemesm....esm lol

Yeah, I know. I can't spell for the life of me.

Okay so I guess this is like the third chapter or somthing like that. Whoa. xD

The waitress came back and slid the pizza's on the hard table. "Here ya go, kids. Enjoy." She said. Mally winked. "Oh don't worry," he said, "We will."
Rocket sighed and grabbed a piece of bacon pizza. "Whoa there!" Mally said. "That's the bacon one." Rocket threw the pizza across the room and grabbed a piece of cheese pizza. Jee-Jee giggled and took a suger packet. As she poured it down her throat, Mally yanked up a piece of bacon pizza. I looked scornfully at these slobs. I never considered myself very clean or anything, but these guys were just.....wow. I shrugged. If you can't beat 'em, join 'em. I thought. I took a piece of bacon pizza. As I ate it I asked Rocket something, "So. Do you eat meat?" I shook his head. "No." He said nonchalontly. Mally was busy staring at me while Rocket curled up in the courner of the booth, nibbling on his not-meat pizza. Jee-Jee was completly loosing it. She had eaten almost every suger packet. I'm PRETTY sure she was saying somthing about "Paper baskets." I looked at Rocket. He stopped eating his pizza. He slowly looked up at me. Somthing happend. Somthing changed in his eyes. Like, they wern't so crule and cold anymore. They wern't as piercing. And I loved it. I gotta tell you, at that one split moment, I want absolutley crazy for him. That one moment seemed to last forever. I could've sworn that we were like that for hours, but accourding to the clock, it was about 8 seconds. Mally bit his lip, nervously. "So." He finally blurted out. "I kidnapped you, because we need you to help us with a certin crime. We need to find this girl named Lacey Meagon." My eyes lit up as I look at Mally. Lacey Meagon? I thought. "She is........well......." Mally began, "Stopping all of our crimes and then started them again. No. This isn't coming out right." He sighed. "She's fixing all our crimes before the Cops can even find out. Then she finds out how we did the crimes. Then she is doing them by herslef all over again. She's taking our credit. People don't even notice who we are when we pass them on the street anymore! They all know Lacey Meagon. But not Mally Renaolds. Not Rocket Michey. Not Jee-Jee Grante. Not Lenny Smith. Not Kassie Marlane." I looked into his green eyes. "Who are the last two?" I asked. He awnsered simpley, "Other memebers of our gang. You probably know of us. We're the KTC." I nearly jumped out of my seat when I heard that. The KTC had been commiting horrible crimes for sometime now. It's actaully a pretty lame name though. It stands for 'Key to Crime'. I bit my lip. "So you want me to help you?" I ask. Mally knotted. "Why me?" I asked. "Well." Mally began, "Let's just say, I know that your really smart. Don't ask me 'HOW' now, okay? I'll tell you later." I shrugged. "Whatever." I said. For some reason, I was some what happy to be with these guys. They seemed fun. I don't know. Maybe it was just Rockey.....I'm not sure. All I knew was, I wanted to drive them places more often.

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"OKAY!" Mally said with a clap of his hands as we were walking to the truck. I smiled. "Ooh!" I said. "Can I drive?" Mally shrugged. "No." I looked down at the ground. "Why not?" He smirked. "Because you nearly killed us all last time." Rocket walked pass me. "That wouldn't be so bad, would it?" He said quietly. I looked at him, explecting to see him smirking, like Mally, but he wasn't. He looked completly seroise. He opened to back on the truck and hopped in. Jee-Jee smiled and hugged her teddy bear. Mally lifeted her into the drivers seat. "Yay!" She said. She clamped her hands. "Who's driving?" I asked Mally. He replied, "Jee-Jee." I nearly passed out with shoke. "What? How old is she? 5?" Jee-Jee called to me from the truck, "6 ACATULLY, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!" I shurgged. What's with all the shrugging today? I thought to myself. "She's a betetr driver then you." Mally said, getting into the seta next to Jee-Jee. "She's the brains of this whole gang, pretty much." I decided not to comment. I climed into the seat next to Rocket. I glaced at me. His eyes were cold and piercing again. I stared at Rocket, but was desracted by Jee-Jee cranking up the radio. So now, if someone saw us, which they would, they would see a 6 year old girl with a teddy bear, driving a truck with the KTC in the back seats, blasting Lil' Wayne. Akaward, much? I glaced over at Rocket. He was staring at me, his eyes were soft again. He looked away as soon as I turned my head to him. I felt a warm feeling flowing threw the car. Not just with Rocket, but with Mally and Jee-Jee. It's weird, but I felt like this is were I belonged.....in a giant truck being drivien by a 6 year old crimanal master-mind. This thought made me giggle. Rocket smiled slightly. "What are you laughing at?" he asked me softly. There was somthing cold about his voice that made my uncomfterble. I blushed. "Nothing." I sat up, away from the window. He looked into my eyes. He nearly took my hands. He said, "Everything's somthing." Suddenly, a shriek of laughter rose up from the front seat. Jee-Jee was screaming. We were on the high-way. It was thne that I noticed, Jee-Jee's not NEARLY tall enough to push the all the peddles. How could she even see what was going on? I looked at her seat. She was sitting on a tall box. "What's in that card-board box?" I asked, pointing to it. Mally shurgged. "Weapons." He said nervously, biting his lip. I sighed. "Guns?" Mally let out a nervouse laugh. "Maybe." Suddenly, 'Tic-Toc' by Ke$ha came on the radio. "Oh yeah!" Jee-Jee said. She pumped up the radio. I couldn't hear myself think. I saw a red light. How are we gonna stop? I think to myself. Mally got down on the floor. He pushed the brake. Whenever we arrived at the red or green light, Jee-Jee would say, "Now!" And Mally would push down on the correct peddle. Everytime the car jerked forward, Jee-Jee let out a shriek of amusment. And everytime she did that, Rocket would roll his eyes and mutter somthing about litte kids. We got some weird looks on that car ride. Eventaully, we arrived at a nice looking house. The car stopped with a jerk. We piled out. We walked into the house. Inside, there was A.C.. It was so nice in there. "Is this your base?" I asked Mally. He knotted. "Not what you expected, is it?" He said. Jee-Jee hopped onto the coach and istantly started drawing on a piece of notebook paper with a crayon. Rocket threw his backpack on a chair and went down that hall. Mally yawned and sat in a rocking chair. Rocket came back in the living room a few minuets later. I plopped down on the leather couch. He took off his black trench coat. And he just sat there. A girl came walking out from the kitchen. She was wearing shorts and a tube top. Her light brown hair was in a pony tail. She was holding a cup with somthing that looked like grape juice in it. She looked at me like I came to tell her that I was better then her. "Oh, right." Mally said, getting up. "This is Kassie." I waved shyly. "Kassie." he said, "This is-"
"Before I know her name, I wanna know why she's here." Kassie inturupted. Mally shrugged. "We brought her here to catch Lacey. And thanks for stopping me, Kassie, I don't know her name." He let out a nervouse laugh. Rocket stood up. He walked past Kassie. "Hey Kas." he said befoer walking into the kitchan. She didn't respond. "DONE!" Jee-Jee said loudly. "Good! Finally." Mally said. "I did it was fast as I could." Jee-Jee said, disapointed, before handing him the paper she was drawing on. Mally looked it over. "Okay." he said. "Yeah, this should work." Rocket came back into the living room, holding two fudge-pops. He smiled and tried to hand one to Kassie. "I know you want it." he said, smilimg. She sighed and refused to take it. "I know you want it!" Rocket laughed. Kassie sarted to laugh. Rocket started to lick his fudge-pop. "So yummy! This makes me so happy and now I don't evny other girls that just walked in the door like Kassie does!" Kassie did a face-palm, sitll laughing and took the fudge-pop from him. He laughed. "I knew you wanted it." He said. He laughed and walked upstairs. I bit my lip. Why are they being so cute? Mally yawned. He crumbled up the piece of paper and tossed it into the trash can. "I'm for one, am taking a nap!"

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was amazing and grate do more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks. :-) I love to write. But I have A LOT of type-o's.........I'll have to fix those.

Well I guess this is chapter 4.

The clock struck 1:00 AM. I was sitting on the couch with Rocket. We were alone. Kassie was crashed in the rocking chair, Mally had was alseep in the kitchan, and Jee-Jee had gone to bed at 8:30. I wasn't sleepy. I felt like I could stay up and talk to Rocket forever. It was weird. I felt like I could marry him right then and there, but I also hated his guts. I don't know how to describe how I felt about Rocket. I had mixed feelings. I think I liked him as a person, but hated him on a romantic way. I think I loved him so much as a friend that I was starting to wonder if I DID wanna kiss him right there in front of everyone. But I hated him in the mooshy-gushy way. There, I THINK That's the best way to describe it. Haha. Suddenly it was 1:30. I was leaning my head on Rocket's shoulder and falling asleep, when I heard Jee-Jee scream from her room upstairs. Rocket groaned. Kassie poked her head up. Mally snapped awake instently and dashed to her room. I got up. I started heading for the steps, but Rocket grabbed my arm. He felt cold. "No." he said. "I don't want you to get hurt if there's some mass-murderer up there." he looked into my eyes. Oh, how I hated him. But I was just dying to kiss him right there, in front of Kassie. I started to head back to the couch to sit down again next to Rocket, but Kassie dove for the seat before I got there. I nearly sat on her! Geez, that girl is speedy. I sat in the rocking chair. "Where should I sleep?" I say, trying to ingnor what was probably happening to Jee-Jee and Mally upstairs. "There's an extra room on the second floor." Rocket said flatly. He put his arm around Kassie. She cluddled up against him. It made me sick. I hate you, Kassie. I though to myself. Mally came back down, holding Jee-Jee. She had her teddy bear and she was wearing her light blue nightgown. She hugged Mally. She sucked her thumb. Tears still slowly trickled down her cheek. She sniffled. I stood up. "What happend?" I asked. Mally sighed. "It was Lenny." He said. "Hear that?" Mally said to Jee-Jee. "You woke everbody up. It was just Lenny. Just Lenny. He'll be walking in any second." Just then, a guy burst threw the door. His dark green hair was spiked and ruffled. He panted. A singal streak of yellow was in his hair. He plopped down on the coutch. Everyone was completly silent. "Hey everyone." He said, smiling. Suddenly, everyone started laughing, cheering, clapping. rubbed his neck. "Yep." he said. "I'm alive." Mally put down Jee-Jee. She screamed with joy and ran over to him. She hopped onto his lap. "I though you were a monster when you were pulling into the drive-way!" I was totally confused. Lenny frose when he saw me. "Well." he said. "Who's this beautiful, young creature?" he said, looking at me. I blushed. I should've slapped him across the face, but I was too charmed. Kassie got up. "Hey Len." She said before going into the kitchen. Lenny took Jee-Jee off his lap and got up. "What?" He said. "That's all I get?" He smiled and ran into the kitchen. I heard Lenny and Kassie laughing. Kassie shieked then broke out into laughter again. When Lenny came back out, he was holding Kassie, who was laughing like an idiot. Her cheeks were bright red. They both panted. Lenny put Kassie down. Mally looked at me. "This is Lenny. Hes Kassie's brother. He went out and tried to steal us more guns." Mally said "And I did!" Lenny said. He took off his backpack. "Take a look at THESE!" He said, takeing a white hand-gun out of this bag. Mally's jaw dropped, Jee-Jee jumped up and down, giggled, and clapped her hands, Kassie smiled and rolled her eyes, Rocket didn't care. Normally the way things go. "Okay." Mally said. "Tomorrow, we try out Jee-Jee's new plan." Everyone knotted in agreement, accept for Jee-Jee who just gigled and said, "Meep!" Everyone went upstairs accept for Rocket and Lenny. Mally lead me to my room. I sat down on the bed. I sighed. I breathed in the cold air. "I'm home." I said soflty.

Please continue

Amazing.

Your 'chapters' are really paragraphs.
Your spelling could use some work.
Not a bad story idea, though.

Okay Loki. And thanks everyone. :-)

Okay. I guess this must be Chap.: 8! Okie Dokie!

I have to say, I really like this story. But it's so freaking short and your spelling....well, yeah. It would be better if you could just fix everything up.

Pretty good, sis. :-)

Thanks Winkie! :3

Chapter 10:

That.....was awesome. 0_O

omgz thats awesome!!!

Thanks, Rachel! :3

OMGZ I love it..... btw i have a question, Did you purposly base Mally off of me or something cuz i think he sounds alot like me.......

This is awesome sis.....

Thanks sis and Rachel.

Rachel: No....I didn't base Mally off you on PURPOSE. Huh.....I guess he IS a little bit like you. :3

ok just making sure.

write more!!!!!!!!