Character Form

Name: Juliet Thais
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Eyes: Bright blue
Hair: Very pale blonde.
Height: 4'11
Body Type: Skinny, very scrawny like.
Skin Color: Fair
God Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: Jason Thais
Country of Origin: New York, USA
Pets: None
Talents: Good with makeup and hair like things. Good at manipulating.
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze Knife.
Flaws: Too arrogant, doesn't care enough for people's feeling that aren't of her friends, rude.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): NONE

Life Before CHB*: Juliet had always grown up in the big city of New York with her dad by her side. She studied hard and managed to pass with B's. She had always enjoyed studying Greek Mythology, something that had to do with her dad's obsession since she was born. "Julie," Her dad had told her. "Greek Mythology isn't just a hobby of something that interests you, Its a life," Juliet had never known what that had meant, but she always took her dad's advice, most of the time. Her mother interested her, but she didn't try to ask her dad about her. Two years later on her eleventh birthday she was running, from a large man eating dog. She just ran, ran for her life. She couldn't remember how it happened someone attacked the monster, it turned to dust, then she blacked out. She woke up how knows how many hours later her arm bandaged, laying in a cot in some strange place. "Welcome to Camp Half-Blood, a safe house for children of the gods."

RP Example*: Juliet was running up some hill. Her feet ached, ballet flats were not made for running. She was sweaty and her hair was an absolute disaster. Why was this thing chasing her. She had a large cut on her arm and it was bleeding through her aqua shirt. She growled, that stain was never going to come out.

Any notes about your characters: Very health conscious.

Add one more flaw.

The life before CHB isn't really a history.

Edited it.

What you wrrote for Life before CHB is more of a roleplay example. What Blaze should have said that it is like a history but a brief one like "Bob lived in *placename* with his parents. This happened. That happened. Insert a brief how he/she came to camp and if they are claimed, how they were claimed." It must be five sentences.

Edited it..

You forgot to add how she made it to camp and so on, like Shan said.

I think I got it this time, hopefully. Edited.

Approved.