Dark Axel 104's Character Form

Demigod Form:

Name:Cloud Strife
Age:13
Gender:Male
Eyes:Gray
Hair:Blond
Height:5,10
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Baige
God Parent:Athena
Mortal Parent:Frank Strife
Country of Origin:America
Pets:A Pegasus Named "Cloud"
Talents:Basketball,Reading,Hand-To-Hand Fighting
Skills:Smart,Athletic,Strong,Stealthy,He Is Also Really Strong.
Weapon:Buster Sword(A Big Sword Like In My Profile Picture).Fists And Legs.
Flaws:Bad Defense,Thinks Too Highly Of Himself Sometimes.Also Over-Confident.Has A Bad Temper.
Powers:His Mind,Strength,And Courage.Cloud Is Really Good At Setting Up A Strategy.He Is Also A Human Calculator.When He Gets A Bad Temper,Cloud Gets Really Strong And Does Anything To Protect People.
Life Before CHB: Cloud Was A Normal Kid.He Did OK In School. Cloud Was Really Popular And Had Tons Of Friends.He Loved Reading But Sometimes It Was Hard To Read.His Teachers Were Weirdos.Parents Don't Care About Him That Much. But,Cloud Loved Greek Mythology!
RP Example:I Was Walking Then........Bam!Out Of Nowhere Something Hits Me And I Crumple To The Floor.I See An Ugly Monster.It Looked Like One Of The Minotaurs From My Greek Mythology Book.I Was So Scared.What The Heck Is Going On Here!!!I Get Up,Dazed And Disoriented,And Punch The Minotaur.Oh No!I Think I Made It Angry!!
Any notes about your characters:Cloud Loves Fighting And Doesen't Want to Miss Out in The Action!

Life Before CHB and RP example should be at least 5 sentences each.

and complete sentences as well. "Normal kid" is not a sentence, nor is "had tons of friends" those would be fragments, and as "Word" suggests, please revise

Please Accept I Think Mine Is Perfect!!

Looks fine to me, but I'm not not a staff member so my opinion is worth about the same is a piece of dust. Hey, at least I said something. Right? Ummmm...... right......?

Demigod Form:

Name:Natalie Rainer
Hair:Dirty Blonde

Age:11
Gender:Female
Eyes:Blue
Height:4,11
Body Type:slim
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:Marie Rainer(Deceased)
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:NONE
Talents:Smart,good at basketball
Skills:Really agile and swift
Weapon**:A bow called:Tearwave
Flaws:Gets too cocky and mean sometimes.Also,thinks too high of herself.
Powers:(must relate to god parent):She can afflict curses (which can cause people to talk in poetry).She can use it twice a day adn it lasts for a week.She can also radiate heat and light when she gets angry.
Life Before CHB*:Natalie was really popular and cool.She was really up-beat and down to Earth.But then,her mom died.Natalie was really shocked and completely lost it.Her mom was the only thing she had.Natalie ran away and found Camp Half Blood.
RP Example*:I was in the mess hall,having breakfast.Then,I saw everyone go to the fire in the middle of the room and push the best thing they had in their breakfast in the fire.Oh my god i thought.This place is sooooooooooo weird.I felt awnward just sitting there so I went up and threw my bacon in there.Ahhhhh.... that looked soooo good.
Any notes about your characters:She is really cute and guys lover her.

add another flaw. Healing charactors arent allowed. Add another sentence to RP example

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Those aren't powers.

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Still arent powers. And you have gender under eyes and no eye color

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What kinds of curses?

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No eternal torment.

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You know, Apollo kids only curse people for poetry as far as we know. Stick to that.

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how many curses a day can she do? and how long does it last?

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Demigod Form:

Name:Zack Aero
Age:15
Gender:Male
Eyes:Gray
Hair:Black (Spiky)
Height:5,9''
Body Type:Athletic
Skin Color:Tan
God Parent:Aeolus
Mortal Parent:Susan Aero
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:None
Talents:Plays the guitar and drums
Skills:Smart,and studios,but still athletic.
Weapon**:A bright,white sword called Gustblade
Flaws:He is really mean to others.Sometimes he uses his powers a lot.Has anger-management issues.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):He can summon wind and can make it really strong(it can blow someone of their feet).It can attack people.He can use it 3 times a day for 10 minutes.When hes really angry,he can summon a tornado,but he might pass out,or die.(There's a high chance he'll die.)
Life Before CHB*:Zack did well in school.He had good grades,he was popular.He had everything.But one day,he got in a fight with his mom.He wanted to go sky-diving but his mom wouldn't let him.So he went behind her back and did it.But in the middle of falling down,he saw someone shaped in the wind that told him to goto Camp Half Blood in Long Island.He went to Long Island and Chiron found him.
RP Example*:I was looking at the waves crash on the beach.It was so beautiful.How could some place this beautiful be so crazy.It's a camp,that trains people to fight!!!Now that parts cool but the climbing wall.Thats freaky!!!!!!!!!!!
Any notes about your characters:Zack loves fighting.

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