Aya Rouchefort (First character) [I THINK ready for approval]

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Name: Aya Rouchefort
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: Her eyes are hazel
Hair: Her hair is brown and curly
Height: 5'0
Body Type: Hourglass
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Aphrodite, goddess of love and beauty
Mortal Parent: Romain Rouchefort, a wealthy business man, also an owner of a bank company. After Aphrodite left Romain, he then remarried by Aya's stepmother, Weiss Froyd
Country of Origin: France
Pets: Her pet rabbit, Snowball. Snowball is a 6 months old rabbit with white fur
Talents: She's good at acting and singing. She's also good at gymnastics
Weapon**: 46 inch Katana made of Celestial Bronze and. Her Katana is medium-length. She also have a 6 inch dagger made of Celestial bronze
Personality: Aya is a silent type of girl and mysterious. Sometimes she get to talk so fast due that Aya is easily nervous. She has a cold personality at first. Aya is also very sensitive. Although, she can be nice and gentle.
Flaws: She has a flaw of Vanity, as usual for Aphrodite children. She might talk very fast when she gets nervous. She can be feisty to other people, she doesn't wanna trust anyone
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She has an ability of: Amokinesis, she can only do this to four people in a day and it last an hour. Although, if a person is madly in love with someone else, she would make it illusion of love as if that person is attracted to her. She can only do this at two person at a time every six hours, which make it four times a day. She can only reach this power at most 10 feet away from Aya
Life Before CHB*: Aya Roucherfort lives in a wealthy family with her dad and her stepmother. They moved to Tokyo after she was born. During her childhood, she's a bit anti-social type. She grew up there, but causing troubles at her prestigious school for the "trouble" and sent to 3 schools in a row but she was able to make a lot of friends. When she was 13, they moved to California and attended an another prestigious school for the "troubled" kids. When she turned 14, she was attacked by a Hellhound but she manages to run away from it then a Satyr found her, running. They were able to make it to camp for a week
RP Example*: As I walk in the Aphrodite cabin, I observed the cabin looked like... a barbie house, literally. I walked around a cabin to find a lower bunk and finally found one. I toss my backpack on the bed and sighed. I glance around and sank down on the bed. Something on my mind keep bugging me but instead I dig in my backpack and took out my sketchpad, I started drawing from what came to my mind first
Any notes about your characters: Face claimed by Crystal Reed

I know this is still WIP but I'm already jumping in if it doesn't bother you :)

I wouldn't allow amber/yellow eyes as a natural eye color, I advise you to change that, if it's okay.

A highlight of white? What do you mean?

[James is not a very French name ^^]

You should precise age and color of her rabbit.

Also, how long is her katana?

Add more flaws, you need to have at least three of them. Also, for hybris, are you sure you mean that or do you mean vanity? Vanity is the usual Aphrodite cabin fatal flaw.

Nice form though, I'm impatient to see it completed!

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How many inches is 'medium-length'?

Charmspeak is not allowed, I'm sorry. It is deemed to over-powered on this site.

HorrorRPGamer wrote:she was attacked by a minotaur

There is only one Minotaur, please change that. (It's as if you said she was attacked by a Circe.)

How did she fight the Minotaur off?

How did she find Camp Half-Blood? It's quite a way from California to Long Island. Did a satyr find her?

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Again, define "medium-length".

How are "French" and "Beauty" powers?

Go into specifics for the Amokinesis. What can she do specifically? How many times a day? How long does it last? That sort of thing.

Circe is not a monster. She is actually a minor goddess, known for transforming her enemies into pigs. She wouldn't have attacked Aya out of the blue.

Edited. Sorry it took a long time, I was too busy at school

How long does her power last, and generally how strong is it? How far could she be at most from her victim in order to use this power on him/her?

Describe her life a bit more. What kind of monster attacked her in her LBCHB, and how did she manage to kill it? How did the satyr find her?

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You didn't answer all of Kenny's questions concerning her powers.

Actually I kinda did

No, you didn't. You didn't answer my distance question, nor did you tell us how strong the power is. Also, you'll need to specify what a "few hours" mean.

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What is amokinesis?

Amokinesis is a power from Aphrodite which is an ability to control emotion of love or desire

Um. I'm kind of hesitant about that power. I mean, if the person loves madly somebody else, would it still work? Would it be an illusion of love, or actual love?

I think it depends, hold on I'm researching

Unfortunately, I found no information about that. Sorry

I edited some information

Please don't double-post.

I'd rather have it being the illusion of a crush, to be honest. Also, what you added in the powers, the last sentence, is no power.

Edited. One question, about the Amokinesis, do I have to give information about illusion of love?

I'd say yes; it's helpful.

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Kendall wrote:How far could she be at most from her victim in order to use this power on him/her?

Still need to answer this.

Also, how strong would the illusion be -- would they feel like they had a crush on this person, or...?

Could you explain about the question? Also, edited