The shadow hope

Yay! My presence it near...Good writing. XD

Thanks

I stand back and looked at her limp form and decided I had to wake her up, but it wouldn't be easy and I would have to do it quick. I then kneeled over her and performed an altered version of CPR. Her eyes instantly snapped open and she sat up, knocking me over, and then she slapped me. "you-you saved me, why? And also nice kiss" she asked eyeing me for any lies or reasons.  "because I couldn't lose a friend like you" I say watching her every move and rubbing the slap mark on my cheek.

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Back in the thrown room...

Viper and Diana slowly crept up when suddenly a young boy snuck up behind them and said "you know there is a safer way?". But Diana had screamed when he surprised her and suddenly they were looking up at the boots of Rita who had a sword out and laughed cruelly "now we have three more 'contestants'".

x...x...x...

Back with Shan and Dylan

"where is this reported slayer?" Shan asked her boyfriend, Dylan who was looking at the blood on his shirt intently as if it meant something.  "I don't know she said she was raiding the armory" Dylan replied and looked into the hall from the conference room they had taken to be their temporary base.  "well she better hurry up it's already been forty five minutes" Shan said then suddenly jumped up at the new strange, yet familiar smell.  The smell was a perfume no doubt about it, but as Shan sniffed the air she was sure she had smelled it before. "Shan you recognize the scent don't you?" Dylan said suddenly and got up and looks at the clock. Then over the loudspeaker and announcer said "attention all personal, a fight is going on in the arena in thirty minutes. The contestants this time are shay and Diana and viper and commander up verses Rita, Morgan, an python. That is all". Shan then locked eyes with Dylan and with the same thought rushing though there heads ran out of the room there weapons clanking on thee belts.

x...x...x

In the preparation room for the fight....


"there weaklings all four of them, and then after these three we can tracks and kill the rest of them eh Morgan?". Rita said pulling on a black t shirt with a bloody sword on the front over her gray tank top, then she gazed at Morgan who was wearing her ripped jeans with one half of a leg missing and a red and black I love Germany t shirt.  "I'm not sure Rita, the next four are the highly skilled ones, remember I fought Zach in the arena and technically if he is held by knightly honor he owes me his life" Morgan replied slipping off her Germany shirt and putting on a golden long sleeved shirt that says SPRTA over the chest going down vertically to the stomach.  "you saved his life didn't you? Well this totally changes the plan my sidekick" Rita said getting her leg armor.  "shut up you idiot commander nova said we were equals, so I'm not your sidekick, at any rate you would be mine, cause I'm the better fighter of us two".

Gotta fight my wife..:c oh well. Interesting scene

great seems like im gonna die!

You won't but someone will
Hehehe

Somebody's going to die. I surely knew that next-in-death-line person--if it's correct. I'll be looking for the surprises. :D

so great

Yes wait for surprises

i know i cant wait XD

Love it!

I am continuing as I recover from surgery.
I do have new information for book two and here it is.......

Name: the melinoe situation
New characters: melinoe shado
Lamount cranston
General Weston
Alexandria McCoy
And even more in progress......



More info will come out when avalible

I really need to catch up on this. Haven't had the time to read it. ):

I request more press release on the prophecy. XD

The prophecy will be partly revealed at end of book one
Fully reviealed book two

You said my character was gonna be involved soon :/

ATTENTION ALL READERS!


If you can discover the main plot you will get a wonderful prize, BUT only TWO try's per person

Zach, you're not supposed to double-post in this section unless you're posting a new chapter.

Ok thanks I wont

Can't wait! Great work, Zach! :D

I've had a couple delays in the writing so sorry for the inconvience

I need to read the whole thing completely. I may of missed some bits.

Meanwhile with the 'contestants'...

"ow this armor hurts us there any alternative, daz?" Diana complained as the brass armor cut into her thigh. "nine madam that's the set that the lord nova assigned" daz replied in a German accent and carefully picked up a legionary helmet and tossed it to commander up. "so you work for the bad guys?" viper asked his cold eyes locked onto daz and wouldn't move off of them. "no not exactly, you see I work for myself and he happened to have enough gold to borrow my services" dez replied sitting down watching them suit up. "who are the people we're facing?". Shay asked strapping on her Indian style breastplate and picking up her arm guard. "don't you remember? We get to face Morgan python and Rita, so we are toast" Diana told her and strapped on her weapons belt of the light English chain and plate armor she had on. Then all four of them grabbe three weapons each and marched out into the arena followed by daz with a sword ready.........

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Meanwhile with Kim and zach......

"run!" I yelled as arrows whizzed over our heads and though our legs, but thank god they weren't hitting us. "zach what's the plan!" Kim yelled as we ran down the corridor being chased by several guards with crossbows.  "see that big open door? Run into that room!" I told her which was my third mistake.  She did as I said and we both jumped in there and te guards passed. But then I recognized my mistake to late as the small room we were in was lifted and opened out onto an arena which was jammed packed and had a special box ready for the evil one himself......

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Back with Shan, Dylan, and Laura......


Laura came in as Shan and Dylan came out and bumped right into them. "hey guys I got the weapons" she said as she stood up and laid the wide range  of deadly toys on the conference table. She then picked up a broadsword and attached it to her belt. "so what's the plan?" Dylan and Shan said at once, then Shan giggled quietly. "the plan is we arm up and go and rescue the others who will most likely be going into the arena soon, like within 10 minutes" laure replied attaching a hunting knife to her sleeve sheath.  Shan then grabbed two rapiers and slid them into sheaths across her back while Dylan grabbed a doulble bladed battle axe and a throwing knife.

x...x...x....

Back with Morgan and Rita 

"ready?" Morgan asked as she emerged from her dressing room and was now covered in gold colored spartan armor. "yup" Rita replied emerging from hers with only a breastplate, and leg guards, with a arm guard on her left arm. Morgan then picked up a weighted golden spear and put it aside, then grabbed her spartan sword and strapped it to the back of her leather belt.  As Morgan did that Rita strapped on both of her swords and put on her helmet and shut the face guard "come on let's go meet python" she said and walked out into the arena.......


(note: the first three people to tell me who python is and who is novas disgrace gets the edited and whole version of the book (at least what has been esited so far))

Well going off context alone....

Nova's disgrace would be Diana Star

And python(I think) has some kinda relationship to viper and Zach. Possibly a brotht or cousin type deal, maybe even an uncle.

You got one right