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by daddeme 4/25/2012, 11:03 pmI think Demetri is the best character XD lol I do sound pretty awesome though
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Dez the Soul Reaver
Diana Star
The Gaurdian
Nemesis
nix
Edgar Allan Poe
Morgan Landry
miss m
Tyrannic
Isabelle_Aphrodesia
pilot
SilverMoon
Amy Pond
daddeme
GwrachSeren
Charlie Scene
Break
Lady Reyna
Bell
Holly
24 posters
The shadow hope
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
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NICE! :) keep going! :) keep on writing! :) Keep it up! I'll look out for the next chapters to come.
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Ok dokie new friend
Tyrannic- Loyal Member
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I believe you need an editor, to you know edit your work before considering publishing. The story line I liked, but it's layout needs improving. An English teacher could help you best, unless you know another person who has more experience. If I can actually get to writing more of my story, actually any of the stories I start, that is what I would do. But still I liked the story line, I expect more.
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Would u like to be an editor
I hate my English subject and teacher
Also I have people who say yes and no
I hate my English subject and teacher
Also I have people who say yes and no
Tyrannic- Loyal Member
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I'm sorry I can't be an editor, (actually I could attempt, it depends on my mood), though I see that paragraph breaks and Speaking quotations need to be implied. Just saying ( though I don't do it my self Xp)
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Alright
Tyrannic- Loyal Member
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Ugh fail I meant breaks at the speaking quotations (I am a fail)
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Thanks and thanks
Bell- Moderator
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Wow. How is the end? Is the hero lose or win? Describe the actions and your story would be golden!
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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It's only halfway over
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Em comes in next chapter and someone dies
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Yes golden
Guest- Guest
Looks aaaaa the golden book light
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Wait till you see the last cliff hanger on this book
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
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oooo cliff hanger you say?
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Yes a huge one
Actually three
Actually three
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
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Hold the sauce!
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Also there is a lot of chaos in the next chapter
Holly- Role Playing Legend
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Be prepared for death and betrayal
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
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like giant snakes? or hairy tatoo artists? or Katniss?
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