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The shadow hope
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 14200
Age : 25
Registration date : 2011-08-04
- Post n°26
Re: The shadow hope
This is really good, I can't wait to see what comes next :affraid: <-----this face freaks me out
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°27
Re: The shadow hope
Wait for tonight and you'll all be surprised
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 14200
Age : 25
Registration date : 2011-08-04
- Post n°28
Re: The shadow hope
Oh snap
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°29
Re: The shadow hope
Do you like being a Russian?
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 14200
Age : 25
Registration date : 2011-08-04
- Post n°30
Re: The shadow hope
....sure...what the ham? Lol okay
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°31
Re: The shadow hope
Your welcome
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 14200
Age : 25
Registration date : 2011-08-04
- Post n°32
Re: The shadow hope
Thanks
Amy Pond- Senior Member
Number of posts : 1835
Age : 23
Registration date : 2012-02-06
- Post n°33
Re: The shadow hope
Purplish? Anyway, I LOVE THE SUSPENSE!!!!:)
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°34
Re: The shadow hope
But wait there's more...
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 14200
Age : 25
Registration date : 2011-08-04
- Post n°35
Re: The shadow hope
Hehe you sound like an infomercial
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°36
Re: The shadow hope
That's the point
Guest- Guest
- Post n°37
Re: The shadow hope
Everyone just wait, there is much more....much much more. Many surprises await all who read this.
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°38
Re: The shadow hope
No not only many surprises
Many surprises and tragedys and romance
Many surprises and tragedys and romance
Guest- Guest
- Post n°39
Re: The shadow hope
Yes, I did not know about the romance part though. The tragedies I sorta know about, but the surprises I do.
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 14200
Age : 25
Registration date : 2011-08-04
- Post n°40
Re: The shadow hope
And awesomeness?
daddeme- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 14200
Age : 25
Registration date : 2011-08-04
- Post n°42
Re: The shadow hope
Oh yeah!
SilverMoon- Senior Member
Number of posts : 1768
Age : 24
Registration date : 2012-03-10
- Post n°44
Re: The shadow hope
Romance...Suspense..Romance...Awesomeness...Romance..Can you tell I like romance stories. XD I hate books like Twilight, but books like PJ have just the right amount...
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°45
Re: The shadow hope
The next part is almost done
With suspense
With suspense
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°46
Re: The shadow hope
I fell though the trapdoor into a prison dungeon of some sort and tripped over a body. When I looked back I saw there were actually two people bound and gagged. One was the girl named Shan who had almost killed me in the arena and the boy was a brown haired and kinda green like eyes. I quickly drew my emergency knife and slit the ropes and untied there gags, and the first thing they did was punch me. The boy got up right after I cut the ropes and punched me hard in the gut. "Dylan stop it he's trying to help us!" yelled Shan from across te room. I slowly stood up and received two dirty looks, when suddenly the door burst open and I saw the three boys I had fought in the arena, Eric, John, and the mute one, and they pushed in a young boy of about eight into the room then turned around laughed and locked us in. As soon as they left I ran two the boy and looked at him searching for any wounds. "does anyone know this kid?" Dylan asked staring at me. "yes" I said slowly "he's my brother viper". "you have a brother!" they both yelled at me then turned and went to there bunks (thank goodness). I unchained my brother and sat next to him and said "it's alright John, how did they catch you?". "I-I-I was walking home and suddenly th-those three grabbed me and tied me up and brought me here". I nodded and looked at his scar on his arm he had gotten from dad and sighed "well go to sleep ill protect you". He laid down and passed out, I smiled and took my knife that i still had and started carving a block of wood that was in the room, just to stay awake. Then at about midnight Dylan woke up and came over to me and said "alright hot shot go to sleep or I'll make you, I'll keep watch". I was reluctant to give up the position but I was tired and crashed on the floor.
x...x....x....
Suddenly it was morning and the Russian burst in with a crossbow and said "all right you idiots and dummies come out slowly, and no funny business, or me and my friends will shoot". We all lined up and walked out of the dungeon slowly when another guard came up and demetri (the Russian) said "comrade break so nice of you to help me with these sore losers". "alright they don't have far to go now" said the guard named break, and they pushed us down the hall, deeper into the fortress. Finally we were pushed into a grand room, the throne room. There was a huge chair in the middle of the room that was raised above the floor, and sitting on this chair was the tyrant, static nova. His face was covered by a stainless steel mask and he wore a black suit of thin armor as well. He spoke with a strange tone and said "prisssoners welcome to nova temple!, soon you will all be my slaves or die bye my assistant!". And with that a strong heavy set man came though and nova yelled out to us "pick your choice!" and laughed. Shan and Dylan stepped back and talked while I made my second big mistake for I said "I challenge your assistant who's name is?." I asked and nova replied "python, so you little boy want to fight python, well be my guest".
To be continued....
x...x....x....
Suddenly it was morning and the Russian burst in with a crossbow and said "all right you idiots and dummies come out slowly, and no funny business, or me and my friends will shoot". We all lined up and walked out of the dungeon slowly when another guard came up and demetri (the Russian) said "comrade break so nice of you to help me with these sore losers". "alright they don't have far to go now" said the guard named break, and they pushed us down the hall, deeper into the fortress. Finally we were pushed into a grand room, the throne room. There was a huge chair in the middle of the room that was raised above the floor, and sitting on this chair was the tyrant, static nova. His face was covered by a stainless steel mask and he wore a black suit of thin armor as well. He spoke with a strange tone and said "prisssoners welcome to nova temple!, soon you will all be my slaves or die bye my assistant!". And with that a strong heavy set man came though and nova yelled out to us "pick your choice!" and laughed. Shan and Dylan stepped back and talked while I made my second big mistake for I said "I challenge your assistant who's name is?." I asked and nova replied "python, so you little boy want to fight python, well be my guest".
To be continued....
SilverMoon- Senior Member
Number of posts : 1768
Age : 24
Registration date : 2012-03-10
- Post n°47
Re: The shadow hope
Yay for snakes!!!!!! XD
Break- Dedicated Member
Number of posts : 1714
Age : 23
Registration date : 2012-02-13
- Post n°48
Re: The shadow hope
Yay for me
Holly- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 10415
Age : 27
Registration date : 2012-02-21
- Post n°49
Re: The shadow hope
Next chapter coming soon
pilot- Role Playing Legend
Number of posts : 11772
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-10-15
- Post n°50
Re: The shadow hope
it sounds really good.
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