The shadow hope

All of the above minus katniss and a certain traitor.....

Is it the poolboy? Always in Mexican dramas. The poolboy did it, didn't he?

No not the poolboy and not the butler

Or the milkman?

Just come to the chat please

i'll try

Ok my comrade

"if you want to die fighting my python champion, be my guest" said the evil lord nova from his luxury booth at the side of the arena.  Then I saw Shan, Dylan, viper, ad a new girl step up to the line to take on python. However python is a ten foot tall humanoid figure who wears a metal cover for his head, and he was wielding a six foot long sword and a six and a half foot tall shield, not to mention the full full body armor.  Then came novas hiss like voice come over the arena and said "all prisoners and sslaves will be forced to sight as a gladiator sport for my amusement". And with that about 10 more kids were thrown or shoved in and they were all unarmed just like us with the exclusion of my little letter opener.  Then from a door under his luxury box came out 10 armed men led by Luke a tall boy with a scar on both arms and blond hair with red eyes. "you have three days until the slaughter starts" said the tyrant.



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We were all thrown into a cell, about ten of us in total. Several I recognized from my first fight, I saw the spartan, Shan, Dylan, and Linsy, which shocked me.  Suddenly there was the sound of two girls screaming and the girl named shay and Diana got thrown in, and morgan, the spartan girl went up to them. "wait, who are you?" I ask the new girl, who had spiky black hair and was holding a dagger.  She replied with a slight evil tone "Emily, not that it matters idiot" and she walked over to the corner.  Then I tile from the floor was lifted and every looked and saw the figure in black ropes step up and out, and spoke with a soft voice "if you people want to live come with me" and disappeared back below the floor. "alright" Shan said "the young and males go first since they are the explorers".  So viper, me, and Diana headed down in the first group.  However chaos started up above as two guards came in Eric and comrade break.  They charged in and asked rudely "where did they go you witch" Eric said directing his question to Shan.  "hey don't talk to her that way!" Dylan said punching break to the ground and picking up his crossbow. Break crumbles to the ground and Dylan tosses a knife to Shan.  Shan catches the knife and holds it defensively in front of Eric. "ha a knife in the hands of an amateur cannot destroy a champion" Eric said, calmly drawing his saber and holding it in front of him.  "don't try anything or I'll kill you if you hurt her" Dylan growls aiming the crossbow.  "ah so your boyfriend has to protect you because your a weakling shanie poo?". Suddenly the girl known as Emily stands up and walks over do that she is right behind Dylan and watches the scene unfold.  "don't ever call me that again you-you-you......" she growls stabbing at his neck. "ha your slow, weak and pathetic Shan just like three years ago" Eric replied parrying the stab and slashing at her leg.  "well I have a confession" Emily says drawing a Gladius "I'm a dirty double crosser".

Great story, but could use a bit of editing.
Otherwise it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

I'm looking for a editor don't worry

Your story is good, it has an great storyline so far and I can't wait to read more of it.

Thanks miss m

this is extremely good. I am sucked in completely

Thanks demetri

Your really nice

don't get used to it. it messes up my image. :)

Alright comrade

Hey should I post my story now, chilicheese?

Yes comrade demetri

Ay sir! I shall return

Really good bro!! :cheers:
thumbs up!

Thanks sis it's goin to continue

awesome Zach!!!!

Thanks cuz

Good story

Waiting for the next part...awesome Zach!